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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Thank you that was great. I can't wait for the last part.


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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Can't wait for the update.

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Incredible story!! Can't wait for the update!! Thank you for not having Lex go see Lana first!!

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

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    Quote Originally Posted by teejei

    'Heart attack. Going to. Faint. Must. Not. Faint!' his mind raced.

    When he got to the table, he cleared his throat and set his cup down audibly. Chloe jerked her head up; weary green eyes stared back into stormy blue ones.

    'Yes. Faint. Now!' his mind compelled.

    "Miss Sullivan," he breathed out.
    This just cracked me up.
    I adore the song and I like how you used it in this fic. Can't wait for more.

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Well, teejei---you know how I feel about this piece. After the night I've had over in another fandom, I reread this and I really needed it. Thanks, sweetie. And than you for allowing a humble beta like me to beta it. I'm really having fun. Maybe I should stop writing and just do this--kidding, I was kidding. Bravo, Bravo.

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Great start..really well done.

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Loved it. THe Chlark was nice, the Clex was good and the impending Chlex was great. Hee Pete and 'She will be loved' . Kinda makes me hate the song less now if it's associated with Chloe.

    Lex took the cup and strode over to Chloe's booth, surprised at his own urgency to get there. There was something about Chloe's pose that tightened his chest, quickened his heartbeat, and pulled him faster in her direction all at the same time.

    'Heart attack. Going to. Faint. Must. Not. Faint!' his mind raced.
    Love this. Eagerly awaiting the next part.
    I tried to drown my sorrows, but the little buggers learned how to swim.

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Quote Originally Posted by lexchloe
    Love this. Eagerly awaiting the next part.
    I second that.

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    suspension of disbelief:
    ---please don't hold your breath too long! my conscience would never let me rest if a Chlexer drops dead from waiting and asphyxiation.

    Hope, Whenyoufall, Gaia and bluegreenswmer:
    ---thanks guys! next one will be up as soon as my beta finishes going over it.

    autumngold:
    ---*hee* i never wanted Lex to speak to Lana. how the show's writers overlook Chloe is way, way beyond me. thanks for the rep points, too!

    Krysia:
    ---i crack myself up, too! hehe. glad you liked that part.

    lexchloe:
    ---well, that was the point of this whole series [as you can see in my A/N]. the DOMOS had desecrated my Maroon 5 song. they must pay!

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    Re: Broken Sonnet Series - Part 2 - I Bruise Easily

    Another great chapter...update soon!!

    Cant wait to see what lex says!!

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