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    Wonderful fic! I liked the mixture of action, romance, and humor. And the Chlex banter was just perfect.

    Chloe pleaded with Clark, forcing her eyes to do that round doe-eyed thing she had seen so many times in movies. Instead of looking pouty Chloe looked so surprised that Clark turned around briefly to see if someone was behind him. Chloe decided the look needed refinement.
    Hee hee! I love your writing style!

    Great job!

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    aww, that was brill!!

    Shame you left chapter 6 to the imagination, but hey, with all that tension in the car, we've got plenty to work with!

    Write more soon,

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    No! No ending! More! Or sequel!

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    yeah....sequel sounds a nice idea....

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    Re: One Stone (PG-13)

    I think the reason I adore this story as much as I do, is because of the camaraderie between Lex and Chloe. I love the image of them peeling out of a parking lot and Chloe laughing hystercially at the near miss of them almost getting caught by the bad guys.

    Brilliant!
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    Re: One Stone (PG-13)

    Great one. Loved how it turned out.

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    Re: One Stone (PG-13)

    That was a great story

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    Re: One Stone (PG-13)

    That was a lovely story, I'm glad i found it!!!

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    Re: One Stone (PG-13)

    This was a very good fic.

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    Re: One Stone (PG-13)

    Great fic
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