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    walking with cavemen Senior Member Zannie's Avatar
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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7) Complete

    Quote Originally Posted by nonky
    “No, you don’t need the satisfaction when you’re really happy. You don’t need revenge when you’re in love.”
    Great line. Very eloquent, simple, and true--even if it was Helen who said it.

    He leaned back in his chair and put his pen down, knowing he wouldn’t be able to concentrate on the documents he was signing while Chloe’s voice was in his ears.
    This made me feel all mushy for some reason--adorable Lex couldn't focus on work while he's talking to Chloe. Couldn't even sign his own name.

    “I love you,” she said, ignoring the tension she always felt between thinking the words and saying them. Ignoring the risk that he wouldn’t return that love.
    *sighs* So psychologically astute. Plus, very touching.

    Lex smiled and his tone turned honey sweet for a brief, precious moment.
    *shudders imagining his voice*

    This was a unique, thoughtful story, and I'm so glad you wrote it. I hardly ever think about Helen, but this was a realistic, fascinating take on the situation.

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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7) Complete

    Very nice. I love how possessive Chloe is of Lex, not even wanting to share his name. Beautiful.

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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7) Complete

    wow. that was so mature and thoughtful. very nice. thanks for sharing.

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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7) Complete

    perfect. chlex forever.

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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7) Complete

    Sneaky of Chloe to do that. I always tried to put hope that Helen just died when she jumped out of the plane that time. I know that sounds bad to hope, but she tried to murder someone. She also sold out the Kents to Lionel. None of those were good things in my book.

    Nice work on the story.

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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7)

    again with the sweet. Yay so nicely done, scary exwive types.

    Thanks
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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7) Complete

    Interesting! Great fic! Love the end!
    *Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
    *Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
    *Are you crazy?
    *From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
    *If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!

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    Re: Alimony, PG-13 (April 7)

    Still one of my favorites
    <3 yams.

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