Great story...I am really enjoying the beginning. And this is very original. Oh I think the proper terminology is not Native American's as it once was believed to be. It is American Indian!
Great story...I am really enjoying the beginning. And this is very original. Oh I think the proper terminology is not Native American's as it once was believed to be. It is American Indian!
I laughed so hard at the image of Bruce waking up to Nell and Lana hovering over him. Poor guy, that had to be a traumatic expereince for him. And Chloe being all confused about men and their behaviour is just so sweet. I adore this story.
MEEEPPPPP!! that was soooooo goood!!!! Love the chlex action, and dont mind the chruce. Gah, I still want to stuff a tepee up nells butt, and can lana please be horribly dissfigured in some way, or better yet, married to Clunk! That enough of a punnishment for anyone! Oh MORE!! PLEASE MORE!!!!!!
Oh my God this story gets better and better. Its about time Chloe gets the guys chasing her. More please......
Hope
"Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "
Great story! I love the by play between Lex and Bruce. The interaction with Chloe is incredible. The charicterizations of Lana and Nell seem right on. I wonder what Clark is going to think about Bruce and Lex wanting Chloe, and how they had a part in making Lana the twit actually do some work.
Susan S
Great updates!! I love the interaction between Chloe, Lex and Bruce but I'm ready to see Chloe and Lex start spending some "quality" time together And could someone just kill Nell, she's so freaking annoying!
Steph*
im really enoying this story, its a really interesting AU. and i think lex and bruce's courtship of chloe is hilarious!
more soon
randa
that was great please update soon i am on the edge of my seat waiting. i hope lex and bruce don't fall for any tricks and lex gets chloe but stays close friends with bruce.
Poor, poor Lex and Bruce!! Just the thought of Nell getting her disgusting paws on either one of them makes me sick!! Lucky Chloe though!! Getting to kiss both Bruce and Lex!! Yummy!! Thank you so much for the extra long update!! You are definitely spoiling us!! Can't wait for more!!
*cuddles new fic*
This is a very, very interesting take, with all my favourite wonderful characters. I'm liking it a lot so far.
I would have gone with slightly aroused there, but it's your story and it is in the NC-17 section. I'm sure the arousal will soon follow. Thank you for the stunning physical descriptions of Lex and Bruce. Yummy.Originally Posted by gumballtiger
Can I go too? No? Okay. Well, as long as you make sure Chloe has lots of fun so I can have to vicarious thrills.Originally Posted by gumballtiger
Keep it coming. *waits*
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