Lying in State - R

[starmoon]

i like this story a lot good work.

[purpleant]

Wow! This was a very intense story. I was a little confused as to who had died, but the they way you portrayed Chloe was amazing. You are a very talented writer, and I enjoy all of your stories.
Thank you

[Reese]

Wait.

What the...? I mean how did...?

Where was I when this was posted? Seriously!?!

An angsty nonky fic? Huh. I'm not sure what to do with this, to be honest. Has the world shifted on its axis? Will Zannie start writing straight fluff with no basis in reality? Will *I* start writing smut?

*almost faints at the idea*

No, no...surely not. This is just one hiccup in the workings of the universe, I'm sure.

Great angsty piece that had me speed reading at the end to figure out who the hell it was waiting for her. Great title, great coverage of Chloe's relationship with all the men in her life (thanks for including Pete...he gets left out so often), great suspense building at the end.

Feel free to dabble in the angst anytime, nonky. Anytime

Reese

[zho9]

I...uh...wow? That was...too bittersweet and angsty for me without my morning coffee.
Just loved it...despite the unhappy ending - I refuse to accept a fanfic world without a happy Chlex ending. (Actually, I think I like it better because of the ending, this piece couldn't have concluded any other way.)

[Pieper]

Great job.

[rockadaisy]

this is such lovely angst. poetic, beautifully written...just fantastic. the desperation is almost tangible, and it gives chloe such a deep sense of character. really nice work.

[SVfan1286]

Amazing story...such a bittersweet and tragic story, but so beautifully written...simply incrediable!

[malugargula]

Great fic

[Ami Rose]

Wow!