Blue, Sabby, you should be warned - I'm about to crazily fangirl you in the next few paragraphs. Don't worry, I'm not a stalker, I just would like permission to set up a shrine and quietly worship both of you. Okay? Thanks.
I've been trying to come up with a suitable response after devoting the last three days to reading BHT&MM, but my brain keeps getting stuck on 'Wow'. Just... 'Wow'.
The entire premise of the fic, the detail with which you've built the relationships, how amazingly 'in-character' they are (taking into account of course the 'Lionel-lite' elements). I love the way you have Chloe and Lex clawing their way to and through a functional relationship. They're complex people, and not a little messed up, and it's only right that any kind of adult relationship will be bloody hard work for them to get to and maintain. (Which, is a direct reflection of the bloody hard work you've both put in to this. It's far too easy to have intractable characters fall in to bed and have the sex make everything 'better').
I love the complexity of Lionel and Lex's relationship too, rather than the simple Manipulative Bastard - Recalcitrant Son facade. Not that Lionel has ceased to be a MB, of course, but there's depth to the motivations here, with real believability. Now personally, I don't think Lionel has any right to throw in the towel until he's made the same number of attempts at reconcilliation as he ever made at fucking Lex up - but that's me. It's kind of fulfilling to read a fic where Lionel recognises his errors, and is honest about the reasons behind some of them, without trying to manipulate forgiveness from his son.
I found, for the first time in many years, trouble suspending my belief in a story. There's so much work and depth and backstory that, for me, it read more like a tale from someone's life rather than a work of fiction (believe me, I know that, given I'm reading this at an online fanfiction site, this probably bodes for a large therapy bill in my future, but let's focus more on the absolute awe I hold you both in for the brilliant work of crafts-woman-ship that this fic embodies).
The humour - oh god it's so hard to try and snicker discreetly at work - the drama, the sex (OMFG - Hot!), there's pretty much no element of the story that I don't love.
No - sorry, that's a lie. The WIP status I could do without, but it doesn't do to be greedy. I shall focus far more on being grateful. I eagerly look forward to your next update - whensoe'er it may come.
Thank you, both, so much.
Your crazy, scary fangirl.
BETH
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