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    storie girl Senior Member starmoon's Avatar
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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    i love this story it was perfect. i love how even though lex want chloe to pertend to loke someone else for his own gain he falls in love with her in the process. i love that lex is so possive of chloe.

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    I sooooooo love this! It was gorgeous!!!

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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    good job!

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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    I don’t know why but this one took me forever to finish. I would continually reach the middle but stop for some reason or another (stupid relatives). It was well worth the wait though.

    You write banter so well it is probably one of the best parts of any of your fiction (setting aside the sex for just a moment). The play between Bishop, Chloe, and Lex was just wonderful and funny. You have such a way with words.

    In addition to the banter you write some of the hottest sex scenes ever. And here I’m talking published authors as well as fanfic writers. You have some serious talent in that area and I for one am pleased to see you put it to good use.

    And the best part was right here:

    “I don’t know how it happened, but apparently they’re seeing each other,” Gabe pushed the words out of his mouth. There was a slight moment of silence on Jonathan’s end of the phone while he frowned and looked at Clark.

    “You want Clark’s help killing him? Because I’ll volunteer,” he said. Gabe gave a sardonic chuckle.
    It was a great story, thanks for writing.

    txalb

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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    I originally read this on your own site but couldn't resist reading it again
    I just love a jealous possessive Lex Just love this story and the banter between Lex and Chloe was really well written

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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    This was great I really liked it !!

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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    Very cute getting Clark and Pete and Clark's dad involved. Good Job!!

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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    Awwwww great story!
    A job well done!
    Come join the dark side. We have cookies.
    Yumm!
    Annnnnd Lex Luther!!!
    Double Yummmmmmmm!!


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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    J'adore

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    Re: Proposition (NC-17)

    Very nice!! I love when Lex gets possessive of Chloe! Thank you for the wonderful story.

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