Consequences (R)

[layell]

Great story. The twist in Lionel's scheme was creepy. I really enjoyed reading this.

[Priscilla Waggoner]

From the beginning you start to think, "hey Lionel's changing", and then you get to the end and your like "that sick bastard"
I think this is one of the best characterizations of him based on the fact that he can even manipulate the reader