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    I loved it, it was soooooooooooo good.... Go Chlex

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    :applause: Matthew was one of the best meteor freaks that ever came out of Smallvile. I loved the whole idea of the story, it was just wonderfull. wow.

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    I love this story so much! The sex scenes were very good and hot. I hate what Gabe did, but it was just perfect that Chloe solved it and got her dad to understand everything.

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    Red face Re: Persephone (NC-17) (complete)

    This was a really, really good story
    Loved the way you wrote Lex especially all the whisperings in Chloes ear about what he could do to her, very hot.

    Just loved this part.....
    Lex glanced down in time to catch Chloe nervously running her fingers over the spot where he had marked her. He stuck his hands in his pockets and tucked his tongue in his cheek. “It’s covered. But if you want another one, I’d be more than happy to oblige.” His statement was rewarded with an irritated glare from Chloe, and Lex couldn’t help but chuckle as he moved to sit behind his desk.
    Who wouldn't want to be bound to Lex for life

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    Re: Persephone (NC-17) (complete)

    a delicious story! fun and smutty.

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    Re: Persephone (NC-17) (complete)

    This fic is fantastic and has become one of my favourites!
    loved the storyline and great smut too !!!

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    Re: Persephone (NC-17) (complete)

    Love it! It was very well written and I love Matthew! Great job.

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    Re: Persephone (NC-17) (complete)

    Yet another great story from you. As much as I love the one-shots I have to admit a particular liking to the longer stories. And this one just blew me away.

    Your original characters were interesting and not flat. I really liked Matthew and could really see him as a real character on the show, you know if he wasn’t actually one since I’ve only seen through season two. As a matter of fact I thought it was nice to see a “meteor mutant” that wasn’t hell bet on murder and/or slightly insane.

    Personally I didn’t think that Gabe’s reactions to the situation were all that far off. He really seems like a father who loves his daughter and if she was truly the only really close person to him I can understand him doing everything he could not to lose her.

    I loved the crack about the pomegranate. It really fit in with the mythology and gave me a laugh.

    I also loved the irresistible tension that these two characters always seem to have in your fics. It makes the final explosions that much more volatile.

    Thank you so much for writing this, it’s definitely one of my favorites (although I don’t think I have ever read anything from you that I didn’t like).

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    Re: Persephone (NC-17) (complete)

    awesome awesome story!!! i loved it

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    Re: Persephone (NC-17) (complete)

    Loved this story!

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