Oh that was a great update!!!! I'm so glad Ben and Chloe are ok... Great job I can't wait to read more... I have a feeling Lex is going to want some blood after this.....
CC
Oh that was a great update!!!! I'm so glad Ben and Chloe are ok... Great job I can't wait to read more... I have a feeling Lex is going to want some blood after this.....
CC
"I am scared that I'm always going to be somebody's friend or sister or confidant, but never quite somebody's everything."
I'm so glad you updated!!! I was missing this story but you came back with a lot of action, now hopefully everyone's ok and they can go after Lionel..if he's the one who did it...I'm just assuming I can't wait for more!!
Steph*
Great you finally updated! Loved the action and that chloe decided to go to Lex at the end of the chapter. Hope for more of this wonderful ficlet!
ooohhhh its getting exciting now!!!! Who tried to grab Chloe, Ben and Martha???? So glad she went to Lex for help and that she trusts him so much. Can't wait for more.
I tried to drown my sorrows, but the little buggers learned how to swim.
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Oooh! The action here just shot through the roof. Exciting and intriguing, and I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
I'm loving Lex in this story. I just adored how he was nagging for Ben's father's name and how anxious he was to find out whether she was pregnant, and this just made me mushy:
Such a little gesture that speaks so loudly . . .The next morning when Chloe got to her desk, the first thing she noticed was a pink message slip on top of her keyboard. To the casual observer, the concise message from an apparently anonymous caller would have seemed an even mix between cryptic and uninteresting. To Chloe, it was a morning greeting that could be topped only by her son's warm, snuggly hugs:
home safe…
And the final bit in this chapter was moving and rich with emotional resonance:
Wonderful stuff. Now I wonder, if I ask for smut, whether they'll be another sexy flashback in the next chapter.Something in her sensed safe haven, and the last of her control snapped. Great sobs wracked her shoulders, and Ben patted at her face with his tiny hands, suddenly afraid again.
"They tried to take my baby," she choked out. Then Lex's arms were around her, her son tucked safely between them.
I love this story more and more. It's exciting and sweet. The emotions are very realistic. I'm glad you updated again and can't wait for more. Lex was so cute on the telephone.
Originally Posted by AlabamaWorley
I have never been so relieved in my entire fic-reading life to get to the part where Superman delivers Ben to Chloe. Maybe it's just because there's a new baby in the family, but I was sweating and making death threats in my head and jittering all over the place. And I love that with a few paragraphs you make Clark the hero he should be instead of the asshat SV makes him.
And Lex the concerned uncle . . . *heart stops, thuds and starts again* I'm not rushing Chloe or anything, but if there was ever a man who could be a devoted husband and father she's hugging him at the end of this chapter. *smooshes Chloe to Lex and runs to get a cleric*
*one hug for your imagination, one for your glorious momminess, and one more for posting an update*
Her soul is senstive like a finely made tuning fork. It vibrates and resonates with every little hint of trauma, evil and monstrosity that might be humming in the air, and channels it into expressions of fiction... or recomended websites - somethingeasy
Yes, it's me again.
I've never been particularly maternal--seldom get mushy over kids or feel a compulsion to have Chloe and Lex start producing offspring--but, you know, as nonky so brilliantly expressed, there's something about this fic that produces those feelings. It's quite unusual for me and thus a little unsettling, but still . . . I'm awed at how you've managed to convey those emotions without descending into hokey cliches.Originally Posted by nonky
And I have to give kudos to nonky for the phrase "glorious momminess"
Oh my God who were those men? Are they after Chloe and her son because of Lex? I am so glad she was saved and Clark saved her son. But i am worried this will let Lex push her away. More please...
Hope
"Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "
I don't think I've ever been relieved to see Clark, but you've done it. When Chloe started screaming, my first thought was "She's in the middle of no where. What good will that do?" Thank God for her quick thinking. I loved that Lana came to the rescue before Clark.
I am glad Chloe finally got them some place safe, Lex's arms.
Can't wait to see Lex on the warpath.
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