Prey for Chloe NC-17

[junelle1]

Excellent Story. Perfect mix of love and naughy seduction.

[lilinny]

I still love reading this story.

[pipersmum]

Wow fantastic story. It was really good loved the change in Chloes image and personality Lana was actually a joy to read for a change excellent job Clark was a big dumb ass that finally realised what he wanted too late Lex, Chloe and Gabe one big happy family great reading. The smut was very hot and I loved the boxing ring sex big thumbs up. Thankyou for writing a very enjoyable story

[Ainur]

This was a great story. Loved it very much. Great job!

[xxasaxx]

This was a great story!!

[teb85]

I love this fic, the characters were so well written. Chloe's change in personality and style was great and even Lana was likable !! The smut was fantastic and i liked how you delt with the seriousness of Chloe's emotions about her mum !! Once again loved it and well done !!!!

[*LexLover*]

I really liked this story, it was very well written and i enjoyed every min. of it

[Esther25jm]

Gorgeous story!!! I enjoyed reading every word of it, especially the Chlex loving. Great job!

[Alizaleven]

Oh my gosh!!! I have no idea how I could have missed this fic for so long, I loved it soo much. I think my favorite part was

Lana pulled her friend into a hug and whispered, “All my bags are packed
Im ready to go…..I’m standin’ here outside your door….I hate to wake you up to say goodbye.“ She felt herself start to cry as she lay her head on Chloe’s shoulder.

“But the dawn is breakin’…Its early morn…The taxis waitin…He’s blowin his horn
Already I’m so lonesome…I could die.” Chloe whispered back to her.

“Cause I’m leavin’ on a jet plane,” Lana finished, feeling herself crying. “and I’m a complete fucking sap.”

“That makes two of us,” Chloe replied.

I know thats a big quote but its my favorite part... you nearly had me bawling at that part... I saw Lana grow from this Lana person from the show to a true friend to Chloe in your fic, and you made me like her, so it was just so sad when the two girls were saying goodbye.

I love how you began with Chloe making a huge change, leaving for a month and coming back completely different, but I'm glad it was for a good reason and not just cuz she wanted to look hot.

I also liked the part in the club where Chloe was dancing with Clark and Lex was all grrrr lol

Your story was amazing, I couldn't stop reading it. Im just glad my interent connection was nice to me through the whole time I was reading your fic. Still I don't know how I could have missed your fic it's amazing, and so wonderful to read.

Oh and I really enjoyed looking up all the awesome music you incorporated into this story

thank you so much

[sarahnicole]

That whole thing was just wonderful...thanks!