The Hollow Men NC-17

[Alizaleven]

This was a really good story, I did feel a bit sorry for Clark but not much, he should have realized something was up long before this happened. Great job! I liked the ending.

[blacktears]

Very fun to read and the end of the story is very good.

[juuicebox]

this was a good fic
good for clark! lol

[SVfan1286]

This story is amazing, I do feel a little bad for Clark though.
I love Lex's character, he is so dark and manipulitaive but at the same time he truly cares for Chloe and wants her to be happy...I loved it!!
This fic is really fantastic, and incrediably hot...Smoken Hot!!

[jkar]

That was kinda bizarre. In that I completely loved it but I didn't really like Clark getting viewing privileges.

I was a little worried at the beginning that Clark would get involved in their play because I certainly didn't want to go there. So you can understand my intense relief when they kept sidelining him.

It was absolutely awesome that Lex was able to help Chloe find her inner spark again. Especially considering he was under a time limit and couldn't be sure he'd get to keep her with him once it was up.

Fabulous, thank you.

Julia

[Tanschana]

Love it!

[emms14]

Grrr, I wrote out a great whole reaction to this story and then my computer did something weird and it went away so this will be a shorter version.

What a great fic! I completely loved it. It was such a contrast between how Chloe acted with Lex versus Clark. It's almost sad how Chloe completely withdrew from Clark emotionally and physically. I'm so glad that Lex gave her back the spark she was missing. I really appreciated how sex between Chloe and Lex brought about hidden emotions rather than the idea of sex=love. I can't remember what else my first post said so I guess this will have to do... Excellent job!

-emms14

[malugargula]

Jesus, that was hot
Great job

[Ami Rose]

Ohhhhhh... wow! Loved it! And loved the ending!