Wow! This is so painfully sad. You need to slap an angst warning on these things. I felt the need to cry (thankfully I was able to restrain myself). Now I have to go and read something happy dang-it.
I love that this is written from Lana’s point of view. You can really see the psychosis coming through. I also got the impression of this haze over her mind the entire time which in turn made the entire story hazy. I don’t know if that makes sense or even if you meant it that way but I thought it really added to Lana’s instability.
Great job on this (despite the depressing nature of the thing), and thanks for writing.
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