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    Insane Troll logic girl lexchloe's Avatar
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    that was a beautifully written, but very sad story.


    "What happened?"

    She looked up at him. Dead eyes. Not his Chloe's. They were the dead eyes of a dead mother. Her gaze did not stray from his when she answered, "The crying stopped, Lex."


    this just got me :crygreen:
    I tried to drown my sorrows, but the little buggers learned how to swim.

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    *sits down and bawls*

    :sad:

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    That was so sad.Chloe should have never had that happen to her. Lex has a lot of work to do if he want to be with Chloe because she will never fully trust or forgive him for leaving. Maby they can start a family but never truly forget or replace there sun James.

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    so it has to feel, if someone grabs right through your chest, pressing your heart with icy, stealy hands...

    so sad, but so well written!
    Thank you!

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    Very well written but a little to sad for me made me go and give my son a really big hug

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    Re: The Crying Stopped (R)

    It was beautiful but sad.

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    Re: The Crying Stopped (R)

    Catheryne, I just reread this beautifully sad story, and I'm still stunned by how emotionally powerful it is--Well done.
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    Re: The Crying Stopped (R)

    That had me to tesrs
    *Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
    *Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
    *Are you crazy?
    *From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
    *If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!

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