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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    Quote Originally Posted by AlabamaWorley
    If you forget-” she cupped his face and forced him to look into her eyes. “If you forget, this will be the last bit of lovin' you get for a very long time. Do I make myself clear?”

    “Yes ma’am.”

    “Good. Now help me get off of this desk.”
    I especially loved that bit of dialogue.

    I'm giggling hysterically for the second time this morning thanks to you, Bama. I've been woefully slack in looking through the older fics, and I never knew you wrote this delightful little PWP. *giggles some more in pure giddiness*

    I feel very clever because--not only did I know it was Chloe from the beginning (you never would have had it really be Lois, not on this board anyway)--but I also figured out she was pregnant on the second or third hint about her size or awkward movements. The smut was very hot, and I love how powerful and in control Chloe was. This was short and smutty, but you kept them both very much in character.

    Quote Originally Posted by AlabamaWorley
    Thank you, everyone who reviewed! I was a little nervous about writing smut, because first, I wanted to be as original as possible, and second... well, it's silly, but I kind of felt like my smut writing was a reflection of my personal skills, so it was kind of like putting my whole bedroom ego out there to be squashed :lol:
    I feel like this every single time I post a smut scene, and--as you know--I post a lot of them. I hover over the "Submit Reply" button and have this weird feeling in my belly, thinking, "Well, here we go again. Another piece of my sexuality on display to the world. Please, please, please don't laugh."

    Anyway, great fic. Sorry it took me so long to find it.

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    Oh 'Bama, I heart this fic...

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    Red face Re: Blank (NC-17)

    Wow great smut, short but good I can't believe that Lex would forget an ultrasound though.

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    Really good, how one couldn't say, why Lois xD

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    lovely. just lovely.
    <3 yams.

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    wonderful story, great smut, and she was pregant! love how you gave hints through the whole story. great work.

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    I;ll admit, I was confused by the Lane thing, but I continued to read knowing there was an explanation. Great story. Loved the smut. You did an amazing job, and you should continue

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    this was a lovely smut filled fic.

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    {chuckles} I got a kick out of this one.

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    Re: Blank (NC-17)

    Wonderful smut. Very funny and sweet! Lex should know better for next time.

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