Nightswimming - R *COMPLETED 7/5/04*

[Tanschana]

OMG you had me saying nothing else but *awwwwwww* and *cuuuuuuuute* for over 5 minutes!
Verrrrry nice story, but now I have to hurry because I want to read the sequel NOW!

[persephone47]

So cute. I loved it, but it was too short :sees link to sequel and runs off:

[ThraceC]

NBG this is the first fic of yours I've read and damn. You are one excellent writer, the banter, the characterizations, the poignant moments and the humor. What perfect lines you create. I've been laughing to myself in a public coffee shop for half an hour and it's your fault. A truly pleasurable read and I'm looking forward to more of your work. Thanks.

P.S. The Latin line nearly killed me. Good one.

[elementia]

That was such a sweet story.
I only wish it was longer.

[jkar]

Very nice.

For some reason their breakfast out - her tucking his tie in, the sugary goodness and the outdoors - it just tickled me.

I'm all eager to read the sequel.

Thank you.

Julia

[emms14]

What a completely awesome chlex story! It wasn't too long but it wasn't too short and it was very sweet. I loved the way Chloe and Lex just happened to meet and immediately hit it off. I really liked how easy their relationship began which was a nice contrast to the end of the story. I think it's great that while the ending was happy, it wasn't necessarily a "happily-ever-after" ending. Despite their goal of continuing a relationship long distance, they realistically know that it may not always be simple. I'm off to go read the sequel now!

-emms14

[talon]

this is a wonderful story! i have read your chlollie, i didnt realize you wrote chlex too!

[paolamhc]

I really enjoyed your story! can't wait to read the sequel.

[Fouzia]

SO sweet!!!

[ermelindis]

I just read this story and it is really marvelous. Very well written. I have enjoyed reading it.