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    Earning His Inches, NC-17

    Earning His Inches
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    Disclaimer: I don't own Smallville or the characters, or Bessie the cow. I don't own orange soda, pineapple on pizza or orange-pineapple ice cream.

    Distribution: I have posted these stories and have control of them on this site. I don't want them to be posted anywhere else unless I'm the one posting them. Please take down my stories if you have them posted on another archive site. I understand I can't stop you from doing this but I hope by asking politely you'll respect my work and my wishes. If anyone has more comfort and convenience saving the text of a story to their own computer, I have no problem with that.

    A/N: I wrote this for a livejournal porn battle in January. (Multi-fandom and worth looking at if you're a light-hearted perv like me: http://battle.oxoniensis.org/) That is the reason why it is (a) short to fit the lj posting limit, and (b) devoid of context except for the small amount of smutty context there is. skauble beta-ed, for that is what she does, and there was a supplied prompt of byline.


    Earning His Inches


    Her dreams ran in inches down columns of newsprint smeared with handling. To her pristine pages of a newspaper were like starched sheets – still waiting for the good part. Chloe Sullivan wanted to be a great journalist, though she would have been red-faced to admit it aloud. She wanted to be read, trusted, respected and known. She wanted credibility and the unique thrill of telling secrets to one and all.

    She also had a personal life and the urge for some privacy. That urge was one of many as she bent over the foot of her bed and opened her legs. “Favourite cereal,” her lover growled into her ear.

    She had a file on him and he was just learning her. His cock played along her pussy for a second before she answered. “Wheaties with strawberries.”

    He dipped in with the blunt finesse his name seemed to embody. Lex was softer, milder, more vulnerable and young. It had a tinge of sinful attraction. Luthor was a high stone wall with every stone too sharp to touch or an ocean so deep and icy its waves felt like cuts. The initial parting of her sticky flesh around him was alarming, and her hands lifted off the mattress. Her arched back tried to push him off her.

    “No,” he said, and ran his hands down her shaking arms to put her palms where he wanted them. There was no time for repositioning. “We both want this, don't we? What's your favourite book?”

    She was processing the idea of his cock inside her as a sensation that hit her nipples, lips, neck, palms and clit. He was barely present yet. It made her want to call a halt and write down everything. It made her want to plead unreadiness. It made her want to beg to be filled up as roughly as she could survive. Her tongue gave the answer he demanded. “Jane Eyre.”

    Lex petted her sides and held her steady as he advanced another inch. Despite her wetness she felt him drag painfully and a pressure she didn't know how to talk around. He had come up against her wall, but it was only tender flesh designed to be broken. She was a virgin and he had cobbled together a game to keep her from panicking. She earned an inch of him for every bit of herself she told him. He sighed, and her hips squirmed in reaction he thought was mixed. Chloe's ribs expanded as she took a deep breath and he found himself echoing it until she exhaled. He was going to have to give her a question worth at least a few inches or her body was going to push him back. From the tightness of her pussy he was going to have to tear her and he preferred to hurt her only once.

    “Who hurt you the most in your life?”

    She whispered, but it was worth a lot she had answered at all.

    “My mom.”

    “Keep breathing,” he said, his hand cupping her belly gently. Lex rubbed the top of her shoulder, up her neck. He brushed her hair to one side and kissed very softly. She wasn't distracted. Her mind threw out words like bleed, hurt, fall, dizzy, hot, trapped, raw. Then he gave a forceful, short thrust and her mind blanked as sharp aching moved through her.

    Chloe's grinding moan stopped him, her muscles twitching. She was throbbing in rhythm with her heartbeat, and he put his hands over her breasts to gently massage. Her head hung down, worrying him. “Chloe?” She nodded slowly, and Lex stroked her belly. The ache was easing, washing away with heartbeats of patient regard. “What's your favourite kind of soda?”

    “Orange.”

    Lex slid further, and paused. “Favourite pizza topping?”

    “Pineapple.” Another inch conquered, and his hands came up to cup her hips. Chloe widened her stance.

    “Favourite fruit?” He sensed her smile.

    “Pineapple.”

    The next inch felt tight again, and he gave her the last question gently, letting her know it was almost over. “Favourite ice cream?”

    Her body jolted and Chloe laughed. “Orange pineapple,” she told him.

    He chuckled and sank to the bottom of her, feeling the dampness on his balls. “Good.”

    In a rare display of patience, she followed his rhythm, panting as she moved. The occasional wince was rewarded by an astounding burst of pleasure and his hands squeezing her.

    His come ran down the column of her thighs trembling like paper, smearing as she moved with Lex. He pushed her to her knees on the bed and she stifled a moan. He was better than a byline, she told him, and he understood, laughing.
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    Re: Earning His Inches, NC-17, Complete

    I remember this when you first showed it to us and I think the same thing now as I did then, which was "drool drool drool". My brain actually spelled out the "drool".

    Quote Originally Posted by nonky
    “What's your favourite kind of soda?”

    “Orange.”

    Lex slid further, and paused. “Favourite pizza topping?”

    “Pineapple.” Another inch conquered, and his hands came up to cup her hips. Chloe widened her stance.

    “Favourite fruit?” He sensed her smile.

    “Pineapple.”

    The next inch felt tight again, and he gave her the last question gently, letting her know it was almost over. “Favourite ice cream?”

    Her body jolted and Chloe laughed. “Orange pineapple,” she told him.
    Either Chloe was saying anything to get him going again or she really is a pineapple and orange fiend. Either way, it was awesome!

    You know what this smut needs? It needs a full story to make it feel better. And with more smut. Yes, definitely more smut. At least, I, Jubilant Alpine Death Strike thinks so. And I have it on good authority that I'm awesome and should be listened to and no one would dispute my assertion.

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    Re: Earning His Inches, NC-17, Complete

    Interesting way to make the sex act itself unique to the characters. I really like the double meaning of "inches" implied here.

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    This was fantastic, Nonky! I loved the how the title took on a double meaning when one finishes reading the story. I really enjoyed the beginning paragraph, with the viewer going into Chloe’s mind and seeing where her deepest passions lie… it’s not with the man between her legs (at least not only with Lex) but with the inches and columns of print that is waiting to be written by her, AND the trust and respect that she’s hoping to earn as a journalist. Chloe’s dream, ambitions and passions were beautifully illustrated in the beginning paragraph.

    I also loved, LOVED the clever, gentle, considerate, imaginative and creative way that Lex devised a way to provide Chloe with a charming distraction during this difficult ‘first time’ for her. It was a VERY clever way, not only to charm her, but also for him to learn about some personal details… and hence for both of them to feel even more closeness during this intimate bond. It was PERFECT!

    She was processing the idea of his cock inside her as a sensation that hit her nipples, lips, neck, palms and clit. He was barely present yet. It made her want to call a halt and write down everything. It made her want to plead unreadiness. It made her want to beg to be filled up as roughly as she could survive. Her tongue gave the answer he demanded. “Jane Eyre.”
    I can see that Lex’s questions also gave Chloe a chance to centre herself. Her thoughts were running a million miles a second in completely different directions, and I can see that the need to concentrate on Lex’s questions allowed her to calm down and focus.

    Lex petted her sides and held her steady as he advanced another inch. Despite her wetness she felt him drag painfully and a pressure she didn't know how to talk around. He had come up against her wall, but it was only tender flesh designed to be broken. She was a virgin and he had cobbled together a game to keep her from panicking. She earned an inch of him for every bit of herself she told him. He sighed, and her hips squirmed in reaction he thought was mixed. Chloe's ribs expanded as she took a deep breath and he found himself echoing it until she exhaled. He was going to have to give her a question worth at least a few inches or her body was going to push him back. From the tightness of her pussy he was going to have to tear her and he preferred to hurt her only once.

    “Who hurt you the most in your life?”

    She whispered, but it was worth a lot she had answered at all.

    “My mom.”
    oh this was goood! Nonky, you managed to capture he moments just before and after Chloe’s ‘breaking’ perfectly. I loved seeing Lex’s concern and concentration as he tried to keep this as gentle and painless as humanly possible. AND I thought it was very clever for him to make a ‘game’ or a challenge to Chloe to have him penetrate her. It probably made Chloe feel like she was winning and gaining something rather than ‘losing’ her maidenhood, virginity, purity or all the other things that a girl might associate with the hymen.

    AND it was a typical Luthor-type thing to do… to ask such a deep, personal and revealing question when Chloe is at her most vulnerable. If she answers, it’s sure to be the complete truth, and I’m sure it thrilled Lex to see such a personal, secret part of Chloe opened to him.

    Her body jolted and Chloe laughed. “Orange pineapple,” she told him.

    He chuckled and sank to the bottom of her, feeling the dampness on his balls. “Good.”
    ROTFLMAO! This was the finest, funniest and most memorable part of the story, Nonky! I was LOL at the idea of Chloe being reduced to just blurting out nonsense answers, unable to concentrate on providing anything more coherent than ‘orange-pineapple’, ROTFLMAO! And I LOVED that even Chloe’s incoherence has a hilarious, ironic, poetic kind of sense to it, LOL! I can see Lex loved it too.

    His come ran down the column of her thighs trembling like paper, smearing as she moved with Lex. He pushed her to her knees on the bed and she stifled a moan. He was better than a byline, she told him, and he understood, laughing.
    And finally, I loved, LOVED the punchline of the fic. Where we finally see Chloe drawing a comparison between the two great passions and sources of pleasure in her life (the inches of a newspaper byline, and the inches of Lex’s cock), and telling Lex that HE was definitely the best.

    LOL! But, in the end, it IS just ‘pillow-talk’. I don’t know whether she was just being ‘nice’ or whether she had been sated into truly believing it, but I wouldn’t count on her assurance being completely true, LOL! But as long as Lex feels good about it, it doesn’t really matter

    This was a wonderful fic, Nonky! I loved reading it, and I look forward to more… whenever you’re ready to post. Good luck with all your other stories… I hope Trauma and Lesser of Two Evils are both coming along well.

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    Great job, loved it.

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    Steamy goodness! I loved it.

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    I love that this story had the right touch of sincerity, humor, and smut. Lex was so sweet to take his time with Chloe. Sweet in that sexy evil kind of way he has. Excellent smutlet.

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    Wow I loved it.
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    Fantastic job, I loved it !

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    very sexy and sweet!!

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