Survival, NC-17, - Aug. 2, 2009 - Epilogue added

[lexchloe]

:cryblue: The hospital scene was so beautiful. Please wake up Chloe!!!! Glad to see the Luthors pulling together. More soon uppyeyes:

[chlexy]

*Reduced to tears*

So beautiful, love your writing.

Tears of happiness next time please though...oh okay, I don't mind a bit more angsty sadness seeing as how I love how you write that stuff too...

It's so nice to see Lionel trying to repair their relationship...and in saying that, you better not pull a whammy and turn Lionel into the bad kind of MB again. Grrr. lol.

Look foward to the next installment.

[hfce]

That was beautiful I can't believe I am liking Lionel in this fic. :lol: More please..


Hope

[Kit Merlot]

This story is just beautiful--WELL DONE :biggrin:

[buddyfozzy]

*sigh* That was so good I've missed this story! :chlexsign4:

[autumngold]

Thank you for the beautiful update!! Chloe just has to wake up soon!! Please!! Lex needs her so much!! Please post more soon!! This story is excellent!! :chlexsign4:

[sylvia]

Oh man.

The Luthor showdown was just brilliant. It always amazes me how accurately you capture their attitudes and mannerisms. I especially like this part:

“And so is she - She’s 17 years old and she’s dying in a hospital twenty minutes away because of you and I. We’re poison. We’ve always been poison!”

Lionel paused. Not anger. Hopelessness, defeat. He leaned into the glass as much as possible, fixing a steady gaze on the man crumbling in front of him.

“Luthors don’t die, son, they get stronger.” His voice never wavered, implacable and sure as the turning of the world.

and also the part about Lex's realisation that Lionel really is dying.


Also like the way you're adding another level of conflict and another enemy. The hospital scene was just beautiful and Lex's one line

“As long as I’m waiting for you to wake up, I’ll tell you about my day. You’re never going to believe this one, but my father is apparently on our side. We could have spent so much more time having sex if he had told us, so of course I’m pissed.”

said so much about their love, and so subtly.


*sniffle* Anyway. I loved it. As usual. Can we have more?

[tiger04]

Great chapter. I hope that you will update more soon. i really like this story. I hope that lex and his dad figure out who is doing this. Chloe is going to be ok right?

Please update again soon.

AT

[Béatrice]

Please more!!! :worship2:

[Thessaly]

You have no idea how warm and fuzzy I felt when I realised you'd written another chapter. Fabulous as always.

That's not to say you can now rest on your laurels. More, faster, longer. By which I mean, the fanfic, not the... look, I'm just going to leave that comment there.

Thessaly