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    Title: Star struck

    Author: Santija

    Rating: PG

    Disclaimer: Sadly not mine

    Spoilers: None

    Summary: A little poem about forbidden love

    A/N: So today Ernie and I are really depressed and what better way then to write a poem and make other people sad, don’t know why but this poem really made me sad, felt like crying after I wrote it, I’ll probably will soon, Ernie cried, he’s such a baby, but I love him, he’s my inspiration, yes I know he’s a computer, but I still love him *hugs computer and gives him a little pat*

    ~*~*~*~*~*~

    Star struck

    He meets her under the star struck night

    When the moon shines so enlightening bright

    Where flowers bloom below the crooked tree

    Along the stream of the glistening sea

    He takes her into a sweet embrace

    Wiping away tears, as his hand cups her face

    He gives her a rose to banish all her fears

    She gives him a kiss for all those long years

    Love between them is by all forbidden

    That’s why our lovers must keep it hidden

    As they dance to the music playing in their ears

    The world around them no longer appears

    This night belong to the lovers alone

    As their beating hearts entwine to one

    Glances and touches burn like an endless fire

    But their hope is sadly beginning to tire

    They cannot stand being apart

    It is slowly crushing their entwined heart

    She reaches up, stretching for the stars

    Silently asking why the world is to them so harsh

    He cups her face again and their eyes meet

    Lips connect in a needing blistering heat

    They tried to love free, but it brought them hate

    As much as he loved her, he could not put her through that fate

    As our lovers pull away, there’s so much left to say

    But now they have to go their separate way

    Our lovers shall for now part

    But their love is still beating in one entwined heart

    ~*~*~*~*~*~

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    Oh that was so sad. :crygreen:
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    That was beautiful!! So sad, but still beautiful!! Give Ernie a pat for me!! :biggrin: And for you !! Thanks for the poem!! :chlexsign3:

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    Re: Star Struck (PG) Completed

    that was perfect but so sad that it made me want to cry.

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    Re: Star Struck (PG) Completed

    Oh my...god...I am not whether I should cry because of the sadness of the poem or applaud because of the good work...

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    Re: Star Struck (PG) Completed

    Loved it
    *Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
    *Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
    *Are you crazy?
    *From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
    *If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!

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