okay..that was unexpected. but still good. is there more? a sequel maybe? please? yes, i'm needy, but, pleasE??
okay..that was unexpected. but still good. is there more? a sequel maybe? please? yes, i'm needy, but, pleasE??
Whoa! I thought the last part was intense.
Lark
good. the last part was intense. need a sequel.
mmmmm
Wow! Very hotttttt and steamy! You've turned me into a human puddle!!! You're right it didn't end in the way I would've liked, but that always leaves me wanting more *cough*sequal*cough*
:biggrin: Couldn't have put it better myself!! :yay: :worship2:Wow! Very hotttttt and steamy! You've turned me into a human puddle!!! You're right it didn't end in the way I would've liked, but that always leaves me wanting more *cough*sequal*cough*
My fellow fiends clammer for an other banquet. Step up, most noble author and feed the hungry fiends! The purple masses suround you fangs and eyes staring hopefully towards you. I call out for you to again feed us fic!
Fanfic Fiend Lark
NOOOO!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! !!!!
Hope :crygreen:
"Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "
I'm proud of Chloe!! How dare Lex give his other lover what he should have given to Chloe!! I hope she makes him beg next time!! Please post a sequel!! :chlexsign4:
Originally posted by eurydices falling@May 4 2004, 07:14 AM
Chloe screamed out. She was mindless with need. Her legs were splayed obscenely wide and her foot slid fitfully against the carpet as the natural movement of air against her pussy drove her wild.
oh my!!! hmy:
and i loved this line
Let the bitch find them, she thought with disdain.
great fic, really hot
Thanks so much for the reviews. It was so fun writing this and I'm glad it was well received.
I am definitely following it up wit ha sequel. I might actually do a series of vignettes that show hidden Chlex moments from the most recent episodes. I'm working on one for Hereafter, but so far it's not shaping up to be NC-17.
Thanks again. You guys so rock.
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