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    Re: Do I have to say the words? (NC-17)

    Hi Moultipass1,

    I'm not a big fan of song fics, but you used the song sparingly and exactly where a real person might use it. You get massive praise just for that, but I also liked how you made a Chlex relationship play out from the easy, flirtatious rounds before they were invested in each other right to the serious phase where they've been together officially long enough to need some reassurances. The smut was sweet and sexy, the relationship talks were suitably difficult to the characters and to read. Clark was even useful! Very nice!
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    Re: Do I have to say the words? (NC-17)

    kitten, while I'm thrilled that you are rediscovering these excellent older fics, I was going to use this one in the Monthly Fanfiction Spotlight.

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    Okay, I'm calm now I'll just have to dig deeper into the Completed Threads...
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    Re: Do I have to say the words? (NC-17)

    This was great! And the ending was perfect!

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    Re: Do I have to say the words? (NC-17)

    Awww that was such a cute ending. But i gotta say that your story had more ups and downs then a rollercoaster (yeah yeah cliche) but it was great i enjoyed reading it

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    Re: Do I have to say the words? (NC-17)

    Great fic! Love happy endings!
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