Accidents Happen (NC-17)

**XANA** · 5th July 2013, 23:02

Great fic!

**Shane77** · 22nd August 2013, 15:27

It was really fun and sexy

Thanks for a great fic!

**HotCrossedBunny** · 24th August 2013, 21:49

Brilliant, simply brilliant although I do hope that they stop being able to read each other's thoughts soon as Gabe is right about their relationship.

**Ami Rose** · 11th November 2013, 18:49

Loved this story. Hope I can find the sequal.

**TrinityR** · 3rd November 2014, 22:03

Ok... Let me just say... I CAN'T. I really can't.
I don't try to be mean here. I wanted to read this story - despite some obvious silly mistakes you made - because it was funny, but I gave up entirely.
this has very little sense to none.
I just point out a few things I notice as far as I read, because I truly can't rtead any further.
1) You don't get an orgasm from dirty thoughts/fantasies. you need a hand for that
2) You don't graze against you best friend and have an orgasm. Even Lex wouldn't just use Chloe and Clark like that
3) You don't HAVE YOUR FIRST TIME IN A LIMO ON A SIDEROAD. Chloe is a respectable young woman. And you just made her lose her virginity like at the back ofd some bar to a stranger. she would never ever act like this after flirting with the guy for barely a day, especially when it was her first time
4) YOU DON;T BLEED SO MUCH AFTER losing your virginity. You spot, more or less heavily but it stops once the hymen is broken and you don't bleed later on! You made it seem like Chloe has a misscariage or an abortion. Or she forgot she was going to have a period.

that what I gathered so far and I refuse to read any more of bullshit.

Once again, I;m not trying to insult you. I am a writer myself and I see how many terrible mistakes I made once. But I listen to a constructive ctritique so I can make myself better in the future. Guess what? I already am.

**lia00027** · 23rd April 2015, 21:26

I'm enjoying reading this funny and entertaining fic, the story itself even though not real but enjoyable to read and i couldn't stop myself reading it until end. Even though clark is annoying and chloe rather weak with him but it still ok because from the year you've written it it's the season where chloe still pining her hope for the farmboy.