Taking Over Me (NC-17) (complete) - Part 6, 'Always With You' series

**hannagreen20** · 7th August 2005, 21:51

>SOB<WEEP<SNIFFLE< Ok, that was the most wonderful series. EVER!!!
At first I was devestated b/c I thought you killed her but then...she's alive! Well, sort of. It was amazing. Great work!
Jo

**txalb** · 6th November 2005, 22:02

Now I have to admit that I was convinced that Lionel was against Lex from the get go. You had me completely fooled (and from the looks of things I wasn’t the only one). I did like that Lionel gave his approval even though it came in such a twisted manner. I thought it was very true to character.

Thank God for happy endings. But really this story needed it and look you were so good to supply us with our needs. I loved the ending. But my favorite part had to be when Lex was arguing with himself about if he was going to call Simon Beruche or not.

Lex rose to pace across the soft carpeting covering the floor, casting glances back at his desk with every turn. He knew that it was there, sitting in his desk drawer. No. He wouldn’t use it. He would be strong. He would . . . fuck it.

This had to be the humorous high point of the story. It made me laugh…or you know, snicker.

Thanks for writing this.

txalb

**elitekat** · 15th May 2006, 19:30

That was great. I read the whole series today and I just HAD to post how absolutely amazing that was. I've decided that they needed a happy ending. You had me fooled in the beginning thinking that Chloe was dead and Lex had to work through his grief. All the emotions that Chlex went through were so realistic that you have a good understanding of human emotions and the human psyche. You've definately captured the readers. Excellent quality and it was my pleasure to read. My gratitude in writing a great piece of work.