The Bachelor (R)

[Béatrice]

Why did you stop here? I want more. Please! :yay:

[nickielh]

I'll second that...........More Please! Great update.

Nickie

[miss_sixty1115]

Great great job!!! More please!!!!

Julie

[Not An Addict]

Hee hee! Oh, how the mighty have fallen. Why do I get the feeling that somewhere in Gotham Batman is kicking criminal ass with just a bit more joviality than usual? ^_~ Ok, initial conversation: great. Lex denying the possibility of wanting her: beautiful. And am I the only one secretly rooting for crazy naked moonlit beach sex? No? Ok, good. ^_~ This is fantastic. Your muse is on the right track focusing on this one, I feel. More, pretty please!

[randa]

ok, im ready for my second...wait, third helping cause this is too much fun!
i know you have that whole rotation thing, but you should just skip that and write mostly this :biggrin: , ok, so i know its not fair to the others, but im greedy so i want more!!

randa

[hfce]

More please :worship2:


Hope :

[asharnanae]

:biggrin: love it!!!! just fantastic!! :worship2:

[ColumbiaBlue]

Why'd you stop it theeerrreee?? :crygreen: We're dying for more, don't cha know!

And am I the only one secretly rooting for crazy naked moonlit beach sex?

I SO agree with you! Lots of it too! Damn that Chris guy or whatever his name was for making Lex mingle with the other airheads. Can't he recgonize chemistry when he sees it? Update update update soon!!!

~Manda :

[Susie Q]

Ok, I’ve never actually watched the show but I know the general premise and I find the thought of Chlex going ‘The Bachelor’ route insanely funny. I can’t wait to see where you take this. Although this 'crazy naked moonlit beach sex' thing sounds like a pretty good idea. :tongue:

[ghostwriter]

As much as i want an update for deserted (and that's a lot, lol) i'm all for leaving the rotation thing and just getting la load of this, and plenty of beach sex in the mix of course.

Can't wait for an update :biggrin:

Ellie

(sorry i didn't review earlier but i was in a hurry :blush: )