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    Memories (PG)

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    - going with the belief that Chloe knew Lex in Metropolis-
    Chloe remembers everything. She remembers him at nine, spoiled and proud; and at fourteen bitter and heartbroken. She loved him most at sixteen analytical and wild.
    She fondly looks back at twenty-two when he was cynical and jaded. Thirty was the year she took his name, and at thirty-two she gave him a son. She pulled him back from the edge at thirty-six, and at thirty-seven he got his baby girl.
    At thirty-nine he buried his father, and at forty they put hers in the ground. His forty first birthday gift was a god son from Pete and Lana. In his forty-forth year he almost lost her to his foolish pride and at forty-eight he made up for it by publishing her book.
    When he hit fifty he decided to retire and made her really happy. At fifty-two they watched their son marry, and they became grandparents at fifty-six.
    They moved back to Smallville at sixty-two and at sixty-five they took up golf. She remembers her worst fears coming true at seventy. Now she realizes she can't ever forget him at seventy-five, sickly and pale. Chloe still can't get past seventy-seven when her husband died.

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    is this your fist fic? cuz if it is, then its really really really good.

    i liked it a lot and look foward to reading more fics from you soon.

    Roslyn

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    Wow...that was really good. It was short and simple and...really really GOOD!

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    yeah its my first fic! i just had this bout of inspiration during math class.. Thanks a bunch for the feedback!

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    WOW! Wonderful job! I really enjoyed it! Keep up the great writing.

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    That was really good. I hope you write more. :biggrin:


    Hope :chlexsign2:
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    Great job

    I hope you write more fics soon

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    Wow. I'm pretty much floored now, cause for a first fic, this is really a good piece. And I like how it is descripitve, eventhough it doesn't go into detail.

    You should definitely write more and post it!

    Can't wait to see your next project

    hugs,
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    uh...wow...It pretty much rendered me speechless and if you've ever read my feedback you'd be very proud.

    Good...no fantastic job at first fic, hell if it had been your twentieth fic it would have been good also.

    And yes, please, feed our muses.

    So sweet, so endearing...

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    this is very very very very good.
    :worship2: :worship2:

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