Wow, as if things were not intense enough, you've knocked it up a peg. Great update, really interested to see where they go from this point.
Wow, as if things were not intense enough, you've knocked it up a peg. Great update, really interested to see where they go from this point.
I tried to drown my sorrows, but the little buggers learned how to swim.
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wow, yes that was intense!!
Wow, great chapter. I wonder how Lex is planning to make this up to Chloe.
wow that was amazing, I hope there's going to be more
Holy crap this is just INTENSE! You've got me hooked!
This was a very powerful chapter. I wonder where they can go from here. Both of them seem a little terrified by what happened in the alley. I'll pray for more slow days at work so you can update more.
Zelda, two wonderful updates
I'm actually stunned after reading this last chapter. The connection between Chloe and Lex almost frightens me--WELL DONE!
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I agree with everyone here wow. There is no way they can get together after this. I just dont see it.
"Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "
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I wonder what Lex will do now? And I wonder how they will interact from now on. I figured that Chloe will still investigate his girlfriend either because she would want to seem profesional with Lex or because he will go over her head to her boss and request her on the case [ he is a Luthor after all and they do get what they want]. I don't see him letting her go so easily. Wonderful insight into Lexes psyche, about him not really needing anythig before , because of who he is. And I just love the visual of him being a part of the shadows in the alley. Just WOW!
woah!
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