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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    Great stuff!!!
    I can always rely on you guys to give us entertaining reading material.
    More soon please!!!

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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    This was so good. I really enjoyed reading this strory.

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    Really enjoyed it!

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    Amazing!

    Really, really enjoyed reading this fic. It was really well written, and will definately reccommend this for people. Wonderful job!!
    I look forward to more of your work.

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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    Fantastic story. Even without any smut you've managed to write a winner. Lex and Chloe are adorable when they aren't infuriating me. The whole story seem very plausible since their relationship really grew and evolved throughout the story. Very nice work!

    -emms14

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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    The story is alright but it's tedious..I mean, you two practically write EVERYTHING they do and say down..It's not good writing.. I mean, I don't need to know when Chloe or Lex 'PICK up a spoon/fork' or whatever..Do you get what I mean..It's a very tedious and annoying story to read but it isn't bad; just tiresome!

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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    loved it
    *Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
    *Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
    *Are you crazy?
    *From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
    *If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!

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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    great story!

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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    awesome story

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    Re: Playing House PG-13

    Fantastic, brilliant, wonderful story. Love the concept, the realistic way that they related, how they still have problems etc but how lovely it is too. Great job!

    Particulay things that I liked (in no particular order):

    1) Townsfolk - I love that they are being loyal for once. I think that most paps could do with being punched in the face.

    2) Chlex - love it love it love it.

    3) Gabe - he is so understanding, funny but realisitic.

    4) Bianca - I loved her "polite language", why didn't Chloe use that when she needed to get through the Talon? I'm using it from now on. "You're welcome", barges through.

    5) Lionel - Ah, the king rat. I'm so glad that he didn't succeed in hurting them although I can't imagine what he will be like in the future, hope he dies from a rat bite.

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