Great stuff!!!
I can always rely on you guys to give us entertaining reading material.
More soon please!!!
Great stuff!!!
I can always rely on you guys to give us entertaining reading material.
More soon please!!!
This was so good. I really enjoyed reading this strory.
Really enjoyed it!
Amazing!
Really, really enjoyed reading this fic. It was really well written, and will definately reccommend this for people. Wonderful job!!
I look forward to more of your work.
Fantastic story. Even without any smut you've managed to write a winner. Lex and Chloe are adorable when they aren't infuriating me. The whole story seem very plausible since their relationship really grew and evolved throughout the story. Very nice work!
-emms14
The story is alright but it's tedious..I mean, you two practically write EVERYTHING they do and say down..It's not good writing.. I mean, I don't need to know when Chloe or Lex 'PICK up a spoon/fork' or whatever..Do you get what I mean..It's a very tedious and annoying story to read but it isn't bad; just tiresome!
loved it
*Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
*Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
*Are you crazy?
*From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
*If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!
great story!
awesome story
Fantastic, brilliant, wonderful story. Love the concept, the realistic way that they related, how they still have problems etc but how lovely it is too. Great job!
Particulay things that I liked (in no particular order):
1) Townsfolk - I love that they are being loyal for once. I think that most paps could do with being punched in the face.
2) Chlex - love it love it love it.
3) Gabe - he is so understanding, funny but realisitic.
4) Bianca - I loved her "polite language", why didn't Chloe use that when she needed to get through the Talon? I'm using it from now on. "You're welcome", barges through.
5) Lionel - Ah, the king rat. I'm so glad that he didn't succeed in hurting them although I can't imagine what he will be like in the future, hope he dies from a rat bite.
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