yeah, I'm with Kris on this one...they definitely seem more like siblings...BUT that little convo about people not seeing what's right in front of them?
Priceless!!
Can't wait to see where this goes.
Great job, guys!
yeah, I'm with Kris on this one...they definitely seem more like siblings...BUT that little convo about people not seeing what's right in front of them?
Priceless!!
Can't wait to see where this goes.
Great job, guys!
Thanks for the update. Please post more SOON. I love this premise.
I really like this part. I have to agree with the other two reviewers. Chloe and Lex bantered but there was no sexual tension to the banter, it was more of a friendship thing. I liked that. It's more of a natural progression from acquaintances with two people in common to friends. I'm excited to see what Day Two of the Sullivan-Luthor household brings.
wow, this is really good so far, even without the smut, I am looking forward to more, update soon.
That was a great update :clap: more please....
Hope :chlexsign2:
"Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "
You pretty much said it all!Originally posted by Jenmar@Jan 29 2004, 07:37 PM
I really like this part. I have to agree with the other two reviewers. Chloe and Lex bantered but there was no sexual tension to the banter, it was more of a friendship thing. I liked that. It's more of a natural progression from acquaintances with two people in common to friends. I'm excited to see what Day Two of the Sullivan-Luthor household brings.
Update this soon!
Yay!! A new update!! I'm always so excited when you post a new chapter to one of your stories!! Will Lex be disappointed when Chloe doesn't wake up in time for breakfast with him? When will he start to see her as a girl? Please post again soon!! :biggrin: :chlexsign4:
I'm really into this story. The interractions between Lex and Chloe are great. And I loved the morning scene. I can just imagine Chloe staggering into the kitchen, and not even caring that a sexy millionaire is seeing her with bed-head and pillow creases on her face.
And what must J.T. be thinking as he drives back to the restaurant?
So, basically, it was a great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next update.
I'm really loving this. I love the Chlexy bickering, I love the insight to each character, I loved the JT - Lex bit.
I loved all the Chlexy interaction!
This fic is really great, I can't wait to read more!
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