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    Chapter Thirty-Seven

    When his doorbell rang, Lex ran to answer faster than he'd gone to meet anyone since his mother's death. His alert posture behind his desk transformed into a ducking, exhilarating motion as his hopes rose out of sight.

    It was stupidly vapid of him to hope -easily the least thought he'd put toward any action in years. It felt wonderful.

    He disregarded what must have been an unholy amount of noise for his downstairs neighbours and sprinted through rooms, hating every square foot of luxury. Chloe was right about his apartment; it was obnoxiously large, expensive, and had no redeeming atmosphere. His shoes skidded on the foyer floor, but he didn't slow down. Catching himself on the wall, he didn't bother to hide his panting breaths. He pulled open the door without looking, heart racing.

    Lex's brief optimism froze solid and shattered. The call girl in his hallway was young, blonde, and dressed to kill. Her dress wasn't red, and it didn't have the flawless gleam of real silk, but it was flattering. She had a jean jacket slung uneasily over the dress, a misstep that signalled urgency. She had to look up at him, and immediately took in details of his appearance; Lex supposed that was only fair. What she saw made her back up half a step and hover in the doorway. It was a sick re-enactment of that first night with Chloe, down to her obvious nerves as she looked at him. He didn't think he knew her, but his mind was occupied with much larger issues.

    “I didn't call for anyone,” he barked. “I don't want company tonight.”

    He knew his temper was shredded, and he'd take it out on her if she complained. His pride hurt to be so deeply unhinged, but the most kindness he could offer the woman was sending her away quickly. Lex was slamming the door in her face when she pushed it and leaned hard.

    “No! Please! I have a message for you! You wanted to buy Lionel Luthor's safety,” she gasped. “I'm supposed to tell you-”

    He moved back and the door swung wide with her weight, sending her off balance. He reached out and held her steady by her wrists. As Lex helped her keep her feet, he dragged her inside and closed it firmly. His glare fixed on her trembling, and he grabbed her purse to throw it away. He wasn't going to be shot now when he might be able to help Chloe.

    “Talk.”

    The woman's eyes were stuck on the purse, perhaps yearning for a weapon inside, or just the security of having it in her hands. She was in her twenties, at least from the wear around her mouth and eyes. Unlike Chloe, she was not new to any of this.

    “Morgan Edge is taking Mr. Luthor and Chloe Sullivan to Metropolis General. He will check Mr. Luthor in under another name, so you should not try to interfere,” she recited woodenly. Lex could see she was barely comprehending her own words, only saying them as she'd been instructed. “You have to go to the hospital alone with the money, and someone will meet you there.”


    “Who?” Lex still had her by one wrist, and his grip tightened threateningly when she shook her head.

    “I don't know that. I was – They told me what to say and they gave me something of hers,” the woman said faintly. She pointed to her purse, moving very little.

    “Something of Chloe's,” he said quietly, pushing away the potential horror of what that token was. His vision washed red for a moment that broke when his grip on her wrist made his messenger whimper. Lex let go, and gestured toward a chair standing flush to the wall. He glared as she sat down, pulling her feet in protectively and closing herself up.

    When he was sure she wouldn't run at him, Lex walked over and picked up her purse. It was more suited to her jean jacket, and the cheap imitation leather had cracks all along the handles. He set it down on her lap and stood back, crossing his arms over his chest to brace for what he saw next.

    The woman dug around for a moment and held out a cellphone. He recognized the model as Chloe's, even with the wave of relief. It was a part of her that could be replaced. Lex had been thinking of fingers, ears, a chunk of lip. He had imagined a soft blond curl across his palm, disembodied from the rest of her tresses. Even the bloodless, painless strands would have offended him to a depth he hadn't known he possessed.

    He was still angry, but he could be rational now. He had his answer to the ransom offer. He would have to listen to the instructions. The phone wasn't proof his father and Chloe were alive, but it was convincing along with Lucas' confession. Horrible as it all was, he could make sense of it and move forward.

    He'd been asking for this, verging on sending out vague prayers. Lex opened the phone and scrolled the display. The last activity had been his call. Chloe hadn't even had time to call for help, and the pang of sympathy for her reminded Lex of his guest. She shifted uncomfortably and eyed the door. She was one of Morgan Edge's employees, acting on his orders. Her appearance suggested she was a prostitute, but she might sell drugs or work in one of his backrooms where various illegal entertainments went on.

    “Why the hospital,” he asked flatly. “Did you see them? Is Chloe injured?”

    “I didn't see the – I wasn't – They made me remember what to say and take the phone. I didn't see anyone,” she stammered. “I looked out my window?” She wavered a bit, uncertain but not dishonest. Lex didn't call her on it. “There was a limo downstairs. It might have been them.”

    She tucked her chin in as if expecting to be struck, and Lex swallowed an outraged snarl. He had no mercy for anyone except Chloe, but the teenager was looking to him for his compassion. She would probably see this prostitute as a person worthy of saving. Chloe would make excuses for the woman standing aside and abetting a kidnapping. The young reporter would tell him it was difficult to fight a man as powerful as Morgan Edge with money and resources; it would be suicidal with nothing to help.

    The bland anxiety from the woman vexed him, made him almost want to take it out on her. Lex threw back his head and shuddered with repressed violence. He wanted to hurt her. He wanted to hurt his father, Lucas and himself. He wanted Edge floating in the harbour. Acting on any of those urges was stupid and impulsive. He had been in training to be cold and mechanical since childhood. His father had prepared him for war, and it was starting to feel like war to Lex.

    “You don't say anything about this,” he said curtly. “Walk out of this building, report back if you have to, but otherwise forget every single detail. Just coming here and delivering your message, you committed three felonies for your boss. If I see you again, I'll have you brought up on every possible charge. Go.”

    She popped to her feet and clacked over his floor, moving with jutting elbows and knees bent. It pleased him on some vicious level. He wanted to see guilty people prone and abasing themselves to make up for the grinding worry he was feeling. Lex had wanted to punish the whore himself, but he thought the justice he wrought should meet Chloe's standards. The woman was free to live her life as best she could.

    He had things to do, and not much time to prepare. Extra time before he arrived would be suspicious to Edge. It was the deal of his life, literally, and every step had to be perfect.


    Chloe had a friend in school long ago who owned a chameleon. The lizard wasn't very friendly with strangers, but once in a while it would sit on a lap or a shoulder. She didn't remember the chemicals that made it able to match its skin colouration to the surface to which it clung. It had stayed with her that even as fast as the lizard could camouflage, there was still an in-between when it looked like a mix of before and after.

    Morgan Edge was no chameleon. When he transformed, it was instantaneous and total. He put the bat away under the bar, finished off his drink, hefted Lionel's body up onto the seat, and addressed her with a polite, distant tone.

    “We're here,” Edge told her, extending his arm. “I know you're in shock, so let me do the talking. It's all been arranged. I'm afraid anything you say will only sound like babbling. I would hate for you to be sedated and not know a thing that was happening.”

    The threat grazed off her battered self-preservation, but she didn't want to be more helpless. He climbed around her out of the limo, reaching in and tugging her arm gently until Chloe followed. She hadn't dressed for the night, but at least she was wearing pants instead of a skirt. Her filmy top blew gently around her waist and she pulled it back down.

    “What about-?”

    Two of Edge's men were gently guiding Lionel out of the other door, holding him up as the older man staggered. He was alive, and Chloe felt brief anger. He was the only man in the world she wanted dead, and he'd probably find some experimental treatment to survive his illness. It wasn't fair. None of this was fair.

    She looked around at the cars and people, entertaining a thousand hopes of rescue. There was a young man who looked strong enough to help her, but he was alone and he wasn't stronger than a bullet. She couldn't call anyone since her phone was gone. Yelling crazy things at random people would make her look like she was being checked into the hospital.

    She walked on Morgan Edge's arm, both of them glancing back while Lionel was seen to a wheelchair. He grumbled and made weak swipes at the flunkies, but went quiet when a nurse hurried over. She pushed Lionel inside another set of doors, and Chloe sat as her rapist was soothed and cared for.

    Edge let her pull her arm away, and she clasped her hands together in her lap. Maybe it looked like prayer, but what she asked for wasn't remotely Christian. She wanted heads on pikes, bodies rolled in ditches. She wanted suffering and misery. She felt like she was able to point a gun at one of these men and shoot. It might be regrettable later, but now she was fighting for her life.

    She looked around the room and saw the usual mix of parents with small children, elderly people, and young thrill-seekers who'd found their limitations the hard way. A clock showed the time, and she watched it tick away most of an hour before a new nurse walked over to them.

    “Mr. Edge, Mr. Luthor is being moved upstairs. If you'll follow me, I'll show you to a waiting room where his doctor will speak with you,” she said politely. “Are any of you that are with him family?”

    “I believe Miss Sullivan has become quite close with him,” Edge said, oozing smarm. “She's been interning with his office. So unfortunate she was present for this accident.”

    Somehow, the nurse didn't notice his oily tone, or maybe Chloe was projecting that on his words. It was certain Edge meant to make her uncomfortable, but someone outside her situation might not see anything wrong with a teenage girl in the company of these monsters. The thought was sickening, and Chloe felt herself go pale.

    “It is too bad,” the nurse said, looking at Chloe with a sympathetic nod. “We'll get you some juice along the way. You look like you could use the sugar.”

    It had been a long time since any meal, and even longer for sleep. Chloe nodded and her arm was tucked back in Edge's elbow with proprietary deference. He even patted her hand.

    “For privacy, I'd like to ask Mr. Luthor be registered under a pseudonym,” he asked. “It's the only way the poor man will get any peace from the media.”

    His hold on her arm squeezed a little, and Chloe knew for sure that Edge was well-informed of her investigation into his past. She walked with him as his men filed in behind, closing her off from the door to the outside world. She could have made a run for it, but she didn't want to see what was behind the contained menace.

    They were back in the city, in one of the places where people went to be safe. Lex would find her there, and she wouldn't have to drive down the panic and act. He would save her. She believed he would save her.

    And if he didn't, Chloe thought bleakly, she wouldn't be alive to suffer anymore.
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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 37 (July 7, 2011)

    Thanks for the update. I really hope that Lex gets to Chloe before Edge is able to do anything.

    Update soon!!

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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 37 (July 7, 2011)

    Lex had already decided his half-brother's gambling days were over. The next time he got in over his head would either finish him off or teach the lesson no amount of handouts could. When the irresponsible behaviour had only hurt Lucas, it had been his choice not to do better. Now that someone innocent had been injured by it, mercy was gone.

    “We can't change that now,” Lex said tersely.

    He was fighting the urge to snap at anybody, and Lucas had played his small role without knowing how or why. Society disregarded bastards, but his father's younger son had been getting into trouble for years. Edge wouldn't have had to ask many people to find out how to get Lucas owing him. The steep debt was probably allowed to rise higher than Lucas could hope to pay off simply in cash. Technically, the young man was too young to gamble even in a casino. He was not quite twenty and his life skills consisted of small time grifting and betting.
    Sorry about the delay in reviews, Nonky. I was traveling, but now I’m back home again, so I’ll be trying to catch up on all the fics that have been piling up on me. There are a LOT of them, and I feel the urge to hide under my bedcovers and ignore them, BUT… one review at a time, right? Less daunting thinking of it that way.

    Anyhow, I loved how this chapter started with some real bonding time between the two Luthor sons. It’s fascinating seeing how completely different background and rearing has produced two such different brothers, and yet both are still fundamentally screwed up by the sins of the father. How the heck did Lionel manage to screw up a bastard son without ever actually being part of his upraising?!?? It’s a special talent!

    In any case, I appreciated and loved how this crises has actually brought both brothers together. Yes, it’s also produced considerable friction, considering that Lex blames Lucas for Chloe’s current situation. BUT, Lex actually admitted that Lucas was NOT to blame for what happened. That it was in fact the neglect from his own father and brother that led Lucas to the vulnerable role of a patsy for malevolent mafia forces.

    Most of all, I was so proud of both brothers. Lucas has hit his low point and received his wake-up call, which means that he WILL be actively working on improving his life. And Lex has managed to find (miraculously) some amount of mercy and compassion within, and promised to help his brother straighten up. I loved the ironic idea that it’s Chloe’s influence that allowed Lex to forgive Lucas for the small part he played in Chloe’s kidnapping and such.

    “I'm not trying to keep you quiet,” he said. “If Chloe wants to prosecute, I'm going to insist you testify exactly what you know. This could turn into the biggest scandal in our family history and I don't care as long as she's okay. I'm not inclined to decide for her if her privacy is worth pressing charges. Dad is going to be dead inside a year, and she might have a lot more to deal with long term.”
    “Would she keep it,” Lucas asked. “If she was pregnant?”

    “She's . . . caring. I think it's possible,” Lex answered. “It's her decision if it comes to that, but I wanted to spare her having to make it.”
    I think it’s becoming painfully obvious to anyone that Lex has it bad for this woman. I loved how every reference to Chloe is spoken with some amount of deferential reverence, as if Chloe is some kind of deity to be worshipped, protected, adored… and above all things… obeyed without question. Lex’s diffidence towards all things Chloe is very deep and extreme. The only question is whether it all comes from guilt and duty… or does it also come from pure genuine caring, affection, fascinating and love too? I’ll bet Lucas is wondering exactly the same thing.

    “She's an Army General's daughter and good at hand-to-hand combat. Be nice to her; she's worried about her cousin,” he said. “Tell her I'll get Chloe back.”

    “I'm very charming,” his half-brother said sincerely. He looked out as Lex stopped at the curb. “Which one?”

    “Lois Lane, the building straight ahead. She is armed, so mind your manners.”

    “Please.” Lucas strolled up to the building like he owned it, scruffy jeans and dirty hair no obstacle to his confidence.
    LOL! Oh, this is actually going to be FUN to watch. It’s going to be very satisfying to see Lucas setting his smooth, cunning, confident nature against Lois’s brash, aggressive directness. Lucas comes from a background where he’s learned to be an underhanded con-artist and gambler… whereas Lois has always been a more aggressive hit first and throw questions at the pummeled form later kind of woman. It’s going to be interesting to see who gets the upper-hand in THAT kind of interaction, LOL!

    There were no messages waiting in his penthouse, just a blatant emptiness he couldn't ignore since Chloe had pointed it out. The expectant air of a home without inhabitants made the decor feel more like art installations than functional pieces. Lex often wondered why people who were barely at home had live-in servants when he did perfectly well at night, but he wished for someone to meet him at the door. No one noticed his presence or absence, and it was the same as not mattering.

    He pushed away the twinge of loneliness and went into his office. His round of phone calls told him what he'd known from the country house; Lionel and Chloe were nowhere to be found. His father had elaborate rituals to guard his privacy. The very security he'd created around himself was acting against a rescue effort.
    Ouch! Lucas’s presence helped hide this… but I only began to appreciate now how Lex is noting his loneliness and isolation more acutely than EVER before. He’s always been alone… but now he’s truly beginning to appreciate how it feels to be lonely, without even that one, single blonde ally that he had managed to find. In Lex’s case, it’s definitely worse to have love and lost, than never to have loved at all.

    She had been thirteen, and no one had ever tried to hurt her beyond playground slurs. Chloe hadn't believed anything would happen, because the world didn't work like that; people didn't hurt each other for no reason. There were wars, and crime, but she was an ordinary girl on a regular night. She was not a target.
    I know that whatever was left of Chloe’s innocence has taken a HUGE battering since her kidnapping. BUT, I loved how this paragraph illustrated that there’s still at least the memory of perfect innocence and idealism left in her. Chloe’s sunny, warm-hearted nature hasn’t been eroded to the point where she doesn’t even remember ever feeling innocent and happy. It’s wonderful to be assured that Chloe still retains enough of her sense of self to still be recognizably her. Lionel has tortured and traumatized her, but he hasn’t changed her fundamental core nature, or her sense of self.

    “I was chosen for my discretion,” she said passively, pretending to study her manicure. “I'll be missed if I don't check in soon with my agency. I assure you, gentlemen, I won't recall a thing about tonight after I'm on my way.”

    Lionel made a subtle motion on the seat, but his hands remained on his drink. Chloe forced a blank smile to her lips; that of a vapid whore waiting for a tip. She knew it was risky to bring attention to herself, but they weren't going to forget about her. Her odds of surviving improved the faster she got away from all these men.

    Morgan Edge nodded with a lazy glint in his eyes. His face was rugged and aged prematurely. He was bigger than Lionel by fifty pounds, probably a few years younger and certainly more muscular. The look was cloying, and it made her feel the psychic imprint of all of his body down on top of her. If he had no stake in personally, he could give her to his men like a party favour. She couldn't tell him she knew he was a murderer. It was her only power and it didn't matter unless she was alive to accuse him. Chloe had to hide that small advantage tight inside her hand, and use it to make a fist.
    Wow! As I mentioned, it’s wonderfully reassuring to see that Chloe still retains, not only her basic sense of self, but also her wits, intelligence and canny sense of self-preservation as well. She hasn’t YET gone numb and deadened from the trauma… she’s still thinking about opportunities and advantages, and finding every way to turn the situation in her favour.

    “Please let me go! Please! I won't say anything,” she begged. “Please, I haven't done anything . . . I won't do anything to you . . . I don't care what you do to him.”

    His eyes scanned her deliberately, and she could almost see cracks ruining his implacably polite mask. “It's a tragedy you're so marked by your surroundings, Miss Sullivan,” he drawled. “Everything I'd heard about you suggested a compassionate soul. Perhaps Mr. Luthor simply ground on you the wrong way. I'll try not to make the same mistake.”
    Damn! Chloe was VERY clever in the way that she presented herself as a useless, silly, unimportant hooker in order to get herself released. It was a great gambit… and it might even have worked… if only Morgan Edge had been slightly less well-informed about the situation.

    BUT, as it is, Morgan seems to be well-aware of Chloe’s true identity… which means that he probably knows her to be the reporter who has been stirring up trouble for himself and Lionel. Oh, Chloe… Oh, NO!!!! Her situation was pretty bad to begin with, but now it’s been revealed to be the worst-case scenario possible.


    Chapter Thirty-Seven

    It was stupidly vapid of him to hope -easily the least thought he'd put toward any action in years. It felt wonderful.

    He disregarded what must have been an unholy amount of noise for his downstairs neighbours and sprinted through rooms, hating every square foot of luxury. Chloe was right about his apartment; it was obnoxiously large, expensive, and had no redeeming atmosphere. His shoes skidded on the foyer floor, but he didn't slow down. Catching himself on the wall, he didn't bother to hide his panting breaths. He pulled open the door without looking, heart racing.
    Wow! The image of Lex Luthor ridiculously pelting towards the doors, dignity be damned, actually skidding on his own marble floors was just… amazing! Nothing could have illustrated better his sheer desperate hunger to find and see Chloe again.

    Lex's brief optimism froze solid and shattered. The call girl in his hallway was young, blonde, and dressed to kill. Her dress wasn't red, and it didn't have the flawless gleam of real silk, but it was flattering. She had a jean jacket slung uneasily over the dress, a misstep that signalled urgency. She had to look up at him, and immediately took in details of his appearance; Lex supposed that was only fair. What she saw made her back up half a step and hover in the doorway. It was a sick re-enactment of that first night with Chloe, down to her obvious nerves as she looked at him. He didn't think he knew her, but his mind was occupied with much larger issues.
    I loved, LOVED the sick, twisted way that Lex drew up parallels between this hooker hired by Morgan Edge, and Chloe Sullivan appearing at his door for the first time. The poor man is hell-bent determined to torture himself in every way imaginable, isn’t he? He’s reminding himself of the myriad of ways that Chloe was so obviously not an experienced hooker, and he should have noticed that right away. AND he’s also torturing himself with avid memories and reminders of Chloe while she still remains elusively out of his grasp and sphere of protection.

    heh… not that Lex allows himself to keep his misery and self-torture to himself alone. I rather liked the way the way that he kept venting and lashing out at the hooker. Actually, liked is too strong a word. I should say I was reassured by the way Lex was allowing himself to lash out. It would make him outright sick to keep all the pain and frustration inside without releasing it somehow. Morgan’s unfortunate hired girl just happens to be handy right now.

    And it was good to see that Lex didn’t resort to brutality with her. He kept his temper limited to merely snarls and grimaces mostly tight, angry looks at her… rather than physical expressions. Good to see that he manages to keep some control over himself.

    The woman dug around for a moment and held out a cellphone. He recognized the model as Chloe's, even with the wave of relief. It was a part of her that could be replaced. Lex had been thinking of fingers, ears, a chunk of lip. He had imagined a soft blond curl across his palm, disembodied from the rest of her tresses. Even the bloodless, painless strands would have offended him to a depth he hadn't known he possessed.
    Holy crap! When Lex made note of ‘horrific possibilities’ flashing through his mind, I had NO idea what he meant. Not until he explicitly visualized all the horrific things that could have been sent as ‘belonging to and identifying Chloe’. BUT, then again, we mustn’t forget that we ARE dealing with Morgan Edge AND Lionel Luthor over here… and neither man would hesitate to cut Chloe and remove bits of her, purely to make a spiteful point.

    She tucked her chin in as if expecting to be struck, and Lex swallowed an outraged snarl. He had no mercy for anyone except Chloe, but the teenager was looking to him for his compassion. She would probably see this prostitute as a person worthy of saving. Chloe would make excuses for the woman standing aside and abetting a kidnapping. The young reporter would tell him it was difficult to fight a man as powerful as Morgan Edge with money and resources; it would be suicidal with nothing to help.

    The bland anxiety from the woman vexed him, made him almost want to take it out on her. Lex threw back his head and shuddered with repressed violence. He wanted to hurt her. He wanted to hurt his father, Lucas and himself. He wanted Edge floating in the harbour. Acting on any of those urges was stupid and impulsive. He had been in training to be cold and mechanical since childhood. His father had prepared him for war, and it was starting to feel like war to Lex.
    I couldn’t help but feel sorry for the poor girl. She was obviously young. Not as young as Chloe, but still young nonetheless, and therefore someone who has most likely been entrapped and enslaved into working for Morgan Edge somehow. Perhaps it was only through her own mistakes with addiction, or perhaps it was poverty… one can’t tell. But it was pretty hard seeing her mistreated so harshly by Lex.

    The only reassuring factor was that Lex himself remained aware that he was angry, not specifically at this woman, but at the situation in general, and was therefore controlling and restraining himself from being outright brutal to the poor thing

    Morgan Edge was no chameleon. When he transformed, it was instantaneous and total. He put the bat away under the bar, finished off his drink, hefted Lionel's body up onto the seat, and addressed her with a polite, distant tone.

    “We're here,” Edge told her, extending his arm. “I know you're in shock, so let me do the talking. It's all been arranged. I'm afraid anything you say will only sound like babbling. I would hate for you to be sedated and not know a thing that was happening.”
    Wow! I love the picture that’s being painted of Morgan Edge, Nonky. It’s amazing seeing him described and depicted as someone who actually is Lionel’s equal in ruthlessness, cunning, control and even intelligence. Morgan is being shown as so much more than merely a thing, and I love it!!!

    Two of Edge's men were gently guiding Lionel out of the other door, holding him up as the older man staggered. He was alive, and Chloe felt brief anger. He was the only man in the world she wanted dead, and he'd probably find some experimental treatment to survive his illness. It wasn't fair. None of this was fair.
    I loved this! I really appreciated how this illustrated how a good part of Chloe’s innocence HAS indeed been lost forever. It’s not possible to feel this level of hate for someone, and still maintain some kind of general idealistic faith in humanity.

    She looked around at the cars and people, entertaining a thousand hopes of rescue. There was a young man who looked strong enough to help her, but he was alone and he wasn't stronger than a bullet. She couldn't call anyone since her phone was gone. Yelling crazy things at random people would make her look like she was being checked into the hospital.
    Chloe’s situation is just… horrible! I’m reminded of this old saying by this man on a small deserted island with no fresh water on it… water, water everywhere, and not a drop to drink. Chloe is surrounded by people of all kinds right now… and not a single one can be called on to save her from these horrible men who are poised to torture and and/or kill her at any given moment.

    “It is too bad,” the nurse said, looking at Chloe with a sympathetic nod. “We'll get you some juice along the way. You look like you could use the sugar.”

    It had been a long time since any meal, and even longer for sleep. Chloe nodded and her arm was tucked back in Edge's elbow with proprietary deference. He even patted her hand.

    “For privacy, I'd like to ask Mr. Luthor be registered under a pseudonym,” he asked. “It's the only way the poor man will get any peace from the media.”
    Once again.. WOW! Morgan’s handling of this precarious, delicate situation is just… amazing! He might technically be a brutal thug, but that doesn’t mean that he can’t affect a gentle, delicate touch when the situation requires it. Just LOOK at the amazing way that he’s managed to explain Chloe’s presence here, AND hide away Lionel’s identity… all without threatening or bribing anyone, and drawing any undue attention towards himself and his true motivations. It’s truly amazing!

    And I just LOVED the idea that he was actually subtly mocking Chloe about ‘the media’, letting her know that he was fully aware of her position as a snoopy reporter trying to ruin him. It’s possible that Chloe was reading too much into the remark, but now I’m beginning to think that Morgan truly IS capable of that level of sophistication, subtlety and dry, dark humour too.

    I’m loving how the story is developing. Please do update soon, Nonky!!!

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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 37 (July 7, 2011)

    I really hope Edge gives Chloe to Lex. Poor Chloe needs a break.

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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 37 (July 7, 2011)

    lex better get to the hospital soon to save chloe.please update soon

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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 37 (July 7, 2011)

    This is a much darker story than I usually read, but it was strangely engrossing. I hope there is some peace for Chloe at the end of all this at least.

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    Chapter Thirty-Eight


    “It's a very good hospital,” Morgan Edge assured Chloe, both of them watching as a nurse tucked an extra blanket over Lionel.

    They were in a private room in an empty ward, only a few nurses coming over from Acute Care on the same floor. The nurses couldn't stay, but they would answer pages and check up on their patient. A doctor had seen Lionel in the ER, and admitted him discreetly after making him comfortable for the night. No one had told her anything directly, but she had heard 'internal bleeding' and 'CT' mentioned. He seemed disturbingly healthy, but maybe it was just Lionel's brave front.

    They were both hostages. She didn't think the opportunity for chivalry would move Lionel to be a better person. It was left to her diminished brain power to get herself to safety. She had lost track of all the turns in the corridors; the blank walls in soothing nothing colours didn't give her anything to retain.

    Chloe had noticed a lot of extra doors and dispensers with antiseptic hand gel. It was very quiet and clean. She assumed it was some kind of infection ward, pushed off by itself to manage the spread of an illness. The nurses kept clucking over the cold rooms, explaining they'd had to ask the hospital custodian to turn on the heat.

    The nurses apologized for a lot of things; every wince and sneer from Lionel producing a stream of professional sympathy.

    “I know it's uncomfortable, Mr. Luthor,” the current nurse told him. “You should be warmer soon, and I'll have some coffee sent in. Is the medication helping you?”

    “Yes, it's fine,” he said impatiently, waving her off.

    The woman took no offence, probably telling herself he was one difficult patient in the many she would treat. It didn't hurt that Lionel was a VIP in Metropolis. He could have had a suite for dignitaries with a huge floor plan and multiple guest sofas, but Edge had a whispered conversation with a doctor and they had all been led up to a more typical room. There was barely space for the two guards, Edge, Chloe and Lionel's bed, but the nurses squeezed past knees and elbows without suggesting anyone had to leave. It was past midnight, and any hope of being kicked out for visiting hours was gone.

    Chloe stood up slowly, feeling the four men watching her as she moved. She rubbed her arms and shivered, reaching for one of the folded blankets stacked on a chair.

    “Sorry, hon,” the nurse told her. “Should be better soon. I'll leave the extra blankets here. Is coffee okay for you?”

    The young woman sighed, and nodded. Her father had tried to lure her away from caffeine with various substitutes, and the forbidden love had grown in persecution. She didn't know if she could drink it, but she could hold it. It would feel warm on her hands. The bottle of juice bought from a vending machine was too acidic. She was fighting a constant burning roll in her stomach, and thinking only made it worse.

    “That would be great, thanks,” Chloe said blankly. She turned fully toward the nurse and realized this was a person who had trained to help people. Edge had brought his guards, but they were playing nice. Maybe this was her moment to get away. “Actually -”

    Everyone in the room looked at her. Edge did nothing, but Lionel's eyes lit up like he was anticipating her next words. Behind the nurse's back, one of the guards pulled his jacket away from his holster and put both hands meaningfully down as if to draw.

    She wondered how she looked to the nurse. She felt battered, but her clothes covered most of it. She was so tired she felt flat. Her body was off balance and sluggish. She couldn't stop thinking – but she was barely able to breathe. She didn't know if any plan would be clever enough when she felt so terrible. This woman might well die trying to help, and it would be for nothing.

    “My stomach is kind of upset. Do you have anything like crackers, if it's not too much trouble?”

    “I'm sure I'll come across the snack cart on my way,” the nurse said sweetly. “Our chocolate chip cookies are way too good for my own good.”

    Swinging the blanket around her shoulders, Chloe sat back down and shifted her chair away from Edge. He glanced at her and gave a little smile. The nurse was leaving, her tread that quick and light step harried nurses everywhere learned from their first hospital.

    “Is Lex coming,” Chloe asked plainly. Her voice creaked on his name, and she felt Lionel looking at her with prying interest.

    “He told my messenger as much,” Edge replied.

    She didn't know quite what to make of that. What kind of messenger would Morgan Edge have? God had angels, beer companies had blimps sailing over baseball games, and evil men should have demons; twisted, diseased heaps of flesh with eyes that spoiled everything they saw. There should be a warning before a man like Edge or Lionel had you, an omen to give a normal person a fair shot.

    Upon their first meeting, she had been wary and upset. Her skin had bristled when he walked past her. Chloe had seen Lionel Luthor for a soulless moneybag. She had wanted to take his funds and use them to power her newspaper. He couldn't make her spy on her friends. She had thought then that her work was more important than her life. Snubbing Lionel seemed like a good plan – what could he really do to a minor? It had all been so underhanded and she hadn't signed anything. He had to go after her personal life because there was no legitimate deal to be made with an underage reporter for dirt on a local farmboy. It hurt to think how she'd outsmarted herself.

    Adults had praised her ambition from her first days at preschool. They were somehow unable to expect her short body could hold focus and ingenuity. She was the shortest kid at day camp, and the first to figure out how to climb up to the forbidden treats cupboard. Bravery wasn't natural to her – she did too much thinking for that – but she could fake it until she accomplished her goals. What was bravery on one occasion became silly delusion. Lionel had her cornered before he'd even asked. He was working on levels she was still surprised to find existed, to say nothing of trying to get her feet underneath her to make countermoves.

    Mistake after mistake after mistake, and all of it had come from her arrogant belief in her own brainpower. Experience counted, and it would collect on her mental boasts.

    Chloe didn't know where it came from, but she was suddenly calm. She had gotten herself involved with Lionel, and though few people could have known how badly it would go, she could keep walking to the other side of this. She had to stop shivering and try to find where she stood now. Morgan Edge had no reason to dislike her personally.

    “Are you going to kill me,” she asked, almost without tone.

    “Oh, I never kill lovely young women,” he chuckled, crossing his legs and leaning toward her confidentially. “Not if I can help it. You have me in a bind, Miss Sullivan. A man's past is sacred.”

    His past was bloody, greedy, and about as unholy as he could have made it short of burning churches. She twitched so even the end of her blanket avoided his knee.

    “I wasn't trying to find out your past,” she said quietly. “I needed something on him.”

    On the bed, Lionel's eyes glowed with some appreciation she was sure she wouldn't like. He smiled fondly and folded his hands peacefully. Her best attempt at getting him in prison amused him, and Chloe swallowed the urge to scream obscenities at him. He had heard it all before, and the loss of control would waste her energy.

    “I understand you were defending yourself,” Edge said pleasantly. “And it does my heart good to see a little blonde David up against old, overgrown Goliath there. I'm not averse your living your whole life, Miss Sullivan.”

    Her heart pounded. She could live. Telling it to herself didn't have the promise of hearing it from Edge. He seemed sure, still, confident.

    “What do I have to do?”

    Her morality adjusted every split second, an exercise in humility. She didn't want to be hurt, but if it meant not dying . . . She didn't want to hurt others, but she could justify it for her self defense. Lionel had taught her a lot, most of it dark and ugly.

    “It's not up to you, but we'll have a decision soon,” Edge smoothed his collar and stood up to help the returning nurse with a tray. “Ah, thank you. I was just reassuring the young lady. Did you know a lot of people are afraid of hospitals?”

    The nurse responded warmly to his banter, and Chloe looked down at her hands. She would make a deal if it set her free, but even that power was out of her reach.


    Lex was glad the hospital lobby was mostly empty. The bright blue floor tiles shone an echo of moonlight with style the equal of any five star hotel lobby; a donation by LuthorCorp if he wasn't mistaken. In another half hour it would be midnight, and all but the Emergency doors would be locked to prevent mischief. Visitors and volunteers were gone until morning. The staff was fewer and more tired. He wouldn't be met by an administrator eager to walk him through a needy ward. He was reasonably sure no one would call in a tip to a tabloid, having spotted him there. His social life was uneventful lately, and he was glad for the low profile.

    His left hand held a soft-sided briefcase; the largest he could find without resorting to a suitcase. It locked with his key tucked into an envelope in his pocket. He hadn't delayed for anything except to stuff money in the bag. His arm ached from the weight, held too tensely in a clenched fist.

    Lex had the driver drop him off. He wanted the large car in case both his father and Chloe were freed once he'd paid the ransom. The limo would park around the back. His driver, a Puerto Rican man named Tino, was good at hiding the big vehicle when Lex didn't want attention drawn to his presence.

    His shirt stuck with clammy sweat under a creased jacket. Lex could feel an overall greasy anxiety making him ugly and uncertain. He had meant his words to Lois Lane, but it was different walking into danger without any support. His guards were standing down or protecting the penthouse. When he had Chloe, Lex knew he would need a safe place to shelter her until she could go home.

    He thought about calling the FBI agents, but they couldn't arrest his father until they could find him. Endangering Chloe wasn't an option. Lionel was probably not palling around with Morgan Edge for old time's sake, and saving one might mean saving the other.

    He would pay a hell of a lot to save Chloe, even if it meant keeping Lionel around longer, too.

    The lobby was modern and well-lit. It felt relatively secure and he could see in all directions anyone might approach. Lex sighed through his nose, and braced himself for the person who was meeting him. He had wanted a deal, and now he had to master his nerves until it came through. After that, he could go back to satisfying the black hole of rage directed at Lionel's manipulations.


    A gangster was giving her a philosophy lecture, though it had evolved into some algebra as well. Chloe sat in the visitor's chair next to Lionel's bed and blinked as Morgan Edge calmly laid out her odds of living through the night.

    “One death is an accident, but more than one becomes an event – something people notice, remark upon, remember. One death is anonymous and commonplace. Everyone knows of a single death. Problems arise when it becomes something conspicuous.”

    So he's probably not going to splatter me all over the walls, she thought bleakly. Good to know at least one of my kidnappers has finesse.

    “Sir,” one of the guards interrupted. “He's in the lobby.”

    “Bring him up,” Edge said firmly. “Check the money before you come in. Not long now, Miss Sullivan.”

    She swallowed hard before squeaking out a question. “Lex?”

    Edge nodded, busy watching his guard button his coat over his weapon and hurry out. Chloe didn't care about being ignored. It was the best thing that had happened to her that day. If Edge didn't care, and Lex paid for her freedom, she could go home. Her fears could turn to the raw, damaged feeling in her soul, and hiding it from her poor, innocent father.

    She might live. She might live and she had no idea how to feel happy about it.
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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 38 (Sept. 19, 2011)

    Thanks for the update. Can not wait to see what happens next. Hopefully Lex can get Chloe out of there with out without too much trouble.

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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 38 (Sept. 19, 2011)

    Yay! I was excited to see you had updated! This was amazing, as usual. I loved the inner look into what was going on in Chloe's mind and her survival instincts as she tried to find a way out. Though my heart kind of broke for her when she asked him what she had to do to survive. Great job, I can't wait to see what happens once Lex gets there.

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    Re: The Lesser of Two Evils - NC-17, Chapter 38 (Sept. 19, 2011)

    Wow. I really missed some update. Hope that Edge is going to play things strait with Lex. Thanks for the update.

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