The Rules of Enmity: NC17

[lj715]

I'm so glad you updated this story, it's so good. Can't wait for Lex's reaction to Chloe @ the party. Still love Charlie. I think Chloe should take his advice & show more skin. This Bobby seems like he's gonna be a problem though. Can't wait for the next update.

[showntell]

Oh the joy of an update...woohoo!

I'm glad you are including the charity ball...I just know interesting stuff is going to happen.

[pipersmum]

Fantastic I can't wait for the next part to find out if there is going to be any trouble and if there is will Chloe be in the middle of it

[Kit Merlot]

Very interesting update, Zelda!

So who is this Bobby jackass actually spying on?

But I do adore how charming Charlie's being not only to Chloe, but to Sherri.

Very nice

[hfce]

Ok I appreciated this update it was great but why didn't Lex pick up Chloe? I hopeeverything is still good between them and why is that guy causing trouble? Inquiring minds want to know.

Hope

[Ann]

Whew! First of all, I am so sorry it has taken me so long to finally get caught up!

A/N: Okay, sorry it took so long, I’ve been re-vamping some of my old work and re-working my computer. Regards to Ann.

Thank you! I love the dress you gave Imigene. Very pretty sounding. And I love how you made her friends with Chloe and Sheri. Makes me feel rather special.

Have I told you yet how much I adore Charlie? The guy is just too adorable! The pissing contest between him and Lex was hillarious because I could just imagine them duking it out in the hallway.

I SO want to kill Jake myself. That guy needs to just disappear. I swear there were times where I just wanted to cry about what he did to Chloe.

And Lex. I am so loving your version of Lex. He's so incredibly hot! I loved the part between him and Jake in Jake's apartment. That was so great. Especially the part where he broke his nose!

Anyway, this fic is beyond great and I look forward to reading more of it!

[eternitychlex]

Awesome.................I wonder what is going to happen at the party; what is that Bobby character planning..........Please update soon........I love it and I can not wait for the Chlex...............

[star del mar]

Even when Chloe's trying to enjoy herself trouble just seems to always be around the corner, what a mess. But I can't wait to see what's going on now and where is Lex? He better be all dressed up somewhere Great update!

Steph*

[Dreamergirl]

Ergh me too Charlie.
Way to build up the scene, waiting anxiously for the next!

[buffiy18]

Come again... back... need more. I love this fix. I'm glad to see Charlie recovering and I'm assuming Chloe is better too... otherwise she would look horrible in that dress with bruises showing all over the place.

Hopefully we will see some Chlex in the next chatper.