I really liked that. Great Lionel/Lex conversation I could actually see it happening. And I loved the thing about the smells in the end.
I loved it
It was perfect
Malu
dialogue was good in this one. The things a father will do for his son. Now off to read the follow up piece
'I build you out of nothing to have you near
I remembered you on trains
So now you're on every train I hear'
Something For Kate: Old Pictures
Really liked this fic especially the description of Lana being hard candy and Chloe a deep scotch, you seem to have hit there characters spot on. I saw the continuation of this fic on the NC-17 forum and I hope to see Lex become even more of an Alcoholic.
Loved the way Lionel talked about Chloe and him comparing her to scotch he just knew that Lex had done the same.
This was fantastic. It's almost eerie how clear Lionel's voice is in this.
I first read this fic right before I read 'The Nudge', but for some reason didn't review... Sorry!
This fic is absolutely incredible. The dialogue between Lionel and Lex was just awesome... Lionel's such a dirty old man, but also oddly sexy. (lol) I loved the comparison of Lana to hard candy and Chloe to scotch. Fabulous writting!
Great job!!
Oh lordy, lordy, how to tell you how much I love this story, Oh yeah: I LOVE this story. I love this Lionel!!!! Thank you for having him here and telling Lex to be smart and go for the girl with substance. And now I must go find "The Nudge" story is talking about.
Rocio
I don't think I've ever reviewed the fic that started my obsession. I really loved the conversation between Lex and Lionel. MB played kid Luthor so well and that is the best part. Lionel, never change!
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“I have the simplest tastes. I am always satisfied with the best.”
Oscar Wilde
My milkshake bringeth all ye gentlefolk to the yard, and they're like it's better than thine, verily its better than thine, I could teach you but I must levy a fee...
"I'm selfish, impatient, and a little insecure. I make mistakes. I am out of control; and, at times, hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.
Marilyn Monroe
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