Hi all! The story is completely written out. I just need to type it all out. I'll post as many updates as I can. Just so you know, this is based on the book, not the movie. I haven't seen it yet. I don't know how different it is from the movie.
Thanks so much for the kind reviews. A lot of this is due to Marc Levy the author. He is SUCH an awesome writer!!
Chapter Eight: Part I-Research
Back at home, Lex sat down at his desk in his home office. He turned on his laptop and logged on to the internet. Their first step was to link up to the Memorial Hospital's web page, where they selected the article with the heading, "Neuropathology and Cerebral Traumatology".
Lex ordered pizza and two beers and announced that there was nothing left to do but read. They spent two days and two nights trying to understand and come up with a key to the enigma confronting them. They concluded that, in spite of the advances of modern medicine, coma remained a mystery, a dark zone in which the body lived divorced from the mind that animated and gave it soul.
Chloe broached the subject by saying, "I think it may be time for you to go back to your real life. You're lucky to have one, and I of all people, know you should live life to the fullest. You can't just drop everything like this. I can visit you after work."
"Don't get dramatic on me,Chloe. I'm simply taking a few days off, doing something I want to do."
"Your embarking on a dangerous and ultimately pointless course."
Angrily, Lex said, "Don't say that!"
"You shouldn't get attached to me, I have nothing to offer you, nothing to share, nothing to give!"
"I'm not doing this only for you, Chloe. I'm doing it for me too. I didn't ask to find you in my closet, bu there you were! I'm the only one who can help you and it's the right thing to do. No one but me can see, hear or talk to you. I can't abandon you now."
"You should have been a lawyer," Chloe said shaking her head.
"I should have been a doctor."
"Why didn't you become one?"
"Because my mom died to early."
"How old were you?"
"Much too young," he said quietly. "Let's drop the subject, okay?"
Part II-Lovesick
"Have you loved many women?" Chloe asked them as they sat on the couch.
"Who counts when your in love!"
"And have there been many who 'counted'?"
Lex told her he had three lovers: one as a teenager, one as a young man, and one as a "not so young man". That struck her as a fair answer, but she wanted to know why it didn't work with Helen. He thought it was because he was too complete. She thought he meant too possessive.
"No, I mean complete. My mother filled me with stories about ideal love...Having such ideals is a heaven burden, at times."
"Why?"
"I set my standards much too hight."
"For your women?"
"For myself." He refused to elaborate.
"So Helen left you?"
Lex didn't reply.
"And you haven't quite healed?"
"Oh, I've healed all right; perhaps the problem was I was never sick. What about you? Have you ever been in love."
"You want to know if I loved anyone? No. Well, yes and no."
"Who was he?"
"He still is:twenty-two, journalist and former farmboy, good-looking, a bit selfish, the ideal guy..."
"And?"
" It was a thousands of light years away from the sort of love your talking about."
"Tell me about him."
So she did. She shared eight years of her life with her "farmboy". Four years as friend and faithful sidekick in highschool, then four years of stormy on-again and off-again college drama in which the actors tore one another to pieces then glued themselves back again time after time. She said it was a selfish relationship kept alive by her desire to feel loved.
"He eventually went back to his highschool girlfriend. A small-town girl with big hopes and dreams that will never lead her any further than the coffee counter at the cafe she worked at."
"Do you miss him?"
"I missed him when we first broke up in January. I've been attracted to the opposite of my ideal man for far too long. Men at the opposite extreme from what would make me happy, that's all."
Lex took Chloe's hand.
"Your being much too serious. Let's get some air."
Author's Note: If you find any typos don't worry. Once I post the whole story I will go back and fix anything I messed up.
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