Uninvited - Pg13 (Completed)

[ruafair]

Excellent :clap: You captured Chloe's POV very well.... And the ending was just :cute:

And I think it's perfect as a one-off (ducks from the other Chlexrs throwing things at me :lol: )

Fiona

[Gemkat5]

That was beautiful! I love how you captured that moment while explaining the history at the same time. Then left it open for future possiblity. Very nicely done! :worship2:

~Kat~

[Ainur]

:chlexsign2: It was great. Chloe wnating to prove to herself that she could be succesful without anybody's help. Specially Lex. She was lucky that he understood that about her. Great job! :worship2:

[AlabamaWorley]

I don't know if it's my mood or what, but this story really got to me. It's very well done. It was especially interesting to see you make this song into a beautiful Chlex piece, because I've been toying with taking it a totally opposite direction in a fic about the forbidden ship. Great work!

[buddyfozzy]

This was so sweet, I almost started crying. Beautiful. Great choice in songs too, that's one of my favorites. :yay:

[Reese]

Oh, now that's what I'm talking about!

Chloe pursues what *she* wants out of life and still gets Lex in the end? Because he understands her, no less? And has basically been waiting for her?

Geez...my life sucks.

Great stuff...

Reese

[starmoon]

that was great and chloe is right they have to do thing right or everything will fall apart.

[meg20]

That was very beautiful and I'm glad they got what they wanted in the end!

[darkangel]

[Nonhalema]

Love it and moving on to the sequel