The dream, while slightly freaksome, has some really interesting imagery going for it. Not to mention the fact that it is completely concentrated on Chloe. Can we say “hope.”
You are really good at painting the picture for me and not forcing me to do it myself. I like that despite the abstractness of this chapter (which really took a different turn form the previous ones) I had no difficulty “seeing” what you wanted me to see.
Good job on this one and thanks for writing it.
txalb
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