Very intresting start, cant wait to read more.
Very intresting start, cant wait to read more.
This is really good, I'm enjoying whats happening so far. I hope there's going to be more soon
another great update. i can not wait to read about what happens next.
No way I want more. How did it leave Chloe and still effect Lex. Come on back please....
Hope
"Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "
I think this is the quickest chapter I ever read. More please.
Everything is happening so fast I think you need to write longer chapters [ or a lot more short ones. whatever you prefere ]
This is a great story, and I'm glad it was Lois and Clark together I don't think i could stomach any more Clark Lana stuff. I loved the Chlex parts , and I agree ,more please
Cannot wait to see where this one goes.I hope youŽll make more Chlex scenes.Update soon, pleeeeease
haha im still complaining about the size, more sin city please *olvatine themesong playing* i like it please update
very interesting so far i can't wait for more so please update soon.
Hmmm... To be honest (which is the way I prefer comments to be), it wasn't the smuttiest I've read. As it is now, it's not really NC17. This would be... Hm.. PG15 tops. I know this story's only started, and things might progress, but you might want to take this under consideration
It wasn't too bad, a little too much OOC for me though But keep at it, perhaps you'll surprise me with a chapter that'll even make me want a cold shower
As a little sidenote: I'm working on writing a little "what's NC17?" topic, which might shed some light as to what NC17 is, or, at least what it is here on NS Just getting all of my facts first Hehe...
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