I loved the ending: it was a good solution and I usually like it when the coda brings back a piece of the story.
Great work.
I loved the ending: it was a good solution and I usually like it when the coda brings back a piece of the story.
Great work.
Wow! Fabulous story! I was so afraid at the end that Lex wouldn't acknowledge Chloe again, but you made it perfect! However, now I admit to being curious. Who will scream first? I really want to believe it will be Lex, but something tells me that Chloe doesn't stand a chance in this bet. What a fun read! Thank you so much for posting a new story!
Wow... don't know what to say! But... That was better then great!
*Coffee Break 9:00 to 5:00 Daily.
*Heaven doesn't want me and hell is afraid I'll take over.
*Are you crazy?
*From zero to insane in 1.5 seconds!
*If I agree with you, then we'd both be wrong!
that was amazing i just loved it.
Last edited by starmoon; 22nd February 2010 at 02:02.
ahhhhhh.... love it the first time a read it, and now on rereading it, I love it even more. fantastic job
Man, I loved this little snapshot of a story. Lex and Chloe stuck in a lab and getting their freak on, YUM.
Good freakin'........DAYUM!!!!!!! Rusty? Sweetie, there's no way that you're smut is rusty cause that was Grade A HOT!!!!!! OMG!! I'm drooling - literally!! Oh, my, hotness...I love this fic and want a continuation. Nay, I beg for a continuation. PLEASE!!!! Great job, cy!!!
I....Oh, uhm, wow. Sorry. Not coherent. Brain is too overheated. This was beautiful. Hot and marvelously descriptive. I love the conflict and the promise at the end.
Delicious!! Awesome job.
-emms14
hi
it was good smut, but really good writing. thank you.
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