SexyChlo.com (NC17) finished: 04/02/2013

[TrinityR]

Sorry, story was deleted.
To read my work go HERE

[HotCrossedBunny]

Very nice start, I am sure that you will deal with whatever it is well just please tell me that there is no sexual abuse in her past.

[malugargula]

Great start
Oh Chloe, what are you up to??? New story???
I don't mind what it is, I'm already loving the fic

[hfce]

Good start. I can't wait to see how this develops.

[TrinityR]

A/NOr you prefer me to take this story down? am I going too far? In my head it looked less harsh...

[HotCrossedBunny]

Oh no this is heart breaking but that is what you are going for, right? No, I wouldn't take it down if I were you. It might be a little near the knuckle for some people - probably me included if there is abuse - but it is a really good concept.

[TrinityR]

Oh no this is heart breaking but that is what you are going for, right? No, I wouldn't take it down if I were you. It might be a little near the knuckle for some people - probably me included if there is abuse - but it is a really good concept.

What about abuse and revenge? have I gone too far? Shall I take this story down and we'll all forget about it?

[HotCrossedBunny]

Revenge is fine, like I said just abuse that I can't take but no there is no reason for you to take it down just because of that. Look at 50 Shades of Grey, a book that I will NEVER read but which has had huge success. Just because it isn't one person's thing doesn't make it bad or mean that others won't love it. You should write what you want but if there is rape highlight the fact in the A/N of that chapter so that reader know.

[TrinityR]

Revenge is fine, like I said just abuse that I can't take but no there is no reason for you to take it down just because of that. Look at 50 Shades of Grey, a book that I will NEVER read but which has had huge success. Just because it isn't one person's thing doesn't make it bad or mean that others won't love it. You should write what you want but if there is rape highlight the fact in the A/N of that chapter so that reader know.

You know I will NEVER read 50 shades of grey either, so we're not that far away with our likings and while I thought I could write it earlier now I feel like it's wrong and I don't really want to. But I can't delete a threat from here

[HotCrossedBunny]

That's good to know. Hang on a second, if you don't want to write it then that is one thing but don't worry about your ability to write it. There is no need to make a decision about it right now and you know if you need to talk it over you can always PM me, sometimes I find that just talking about it makes it easier.