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    Undercover Warrior (PG-13) Link to Podfic added March 11th, '11

    SUMMARY: Sometimes a warrior has to lie down and wait for the perfect moment to rise and strike back.

    AUTHOR: Lexie

    RATING: PG-13

    PAIRING: Chlex

    SPOILERS: Roulette, Warrior

    A/N: here’s my own personal spin on Warrior – an attempt to fix the ending, which I found so disappointing.

    ETA: You can listen to this as a Podfic by clicking here. (Check out my signature for a link to my master list, where you'll find more audio stories).


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    UNDERCOVER WARRIOR

    He’s learnt to be patient. He’s given her time and space, seen her become more and more isolated to the point that her only connection to the real world is through the eye of a camera. She’s turned into a recluse obsessed with having the control of the game and the pieces on the board. In many ways, she’s become what she proclaims to hate the most in this world- him.

    He’s looked forward to this moment for over a year now. Hanging on the fringes, playing his part and waiting for the perfect moment to strike, hating the wrappings he’s been forced to don in order to accomplish his goal. It’s been the only way to be close to her, a necessary evil to get him what she would never give him willingly.

    He looks at the man who has been his nemesis since his childhood through the one-way mirror of the 33.1 padded cell which has been the former hero’s house for months now. He clenches his teeth and hopes his carefully designed plan works to stop seeing that face in the looking-glass every day he wakes up.

    Leaving breadcrumbs to lead Zatara’s daughter to his lair and have her perform her magic for him twice cost Lex her family’s Book of Spells- on which he’d spent a fortune-but earned him an ally worth having in his ranks. She’s managed to get Clark’s trust and play the role he’s assigned her at Metropolis Wonder Con to perfection and Lex’s childhood comic hero will pave the way to have Chloe where he wants.

    He’s picked the comic book personally out of his vast and expensive collection. The plot of the special and rare issue is just what she’d fall for, it’s too close to the reality she’d like to live in forever not to. He’ll give her her hero- the substitute Clark Kent she’ll never have- let her enjoy the illusion for a short while, let her deceive herself that a sidekick’s all that she’s ever meant to be. And then, he’ll break her only to build her up again.

    For a minute there he’s tempted to open the old comic and test Zatanna’s spell on himself, feel the exhilaration of being embraced and accepted, of flying and breaking the chains that have tied him since the day of his conception. But the wish is short-lived, he’s always meant to be Devilicus in the eyes of the world and he’s no longer naïve enough to believe his efforts to change that preconception will make a difference now. The dice have been thrown and the only thing left for him to do is to sit back and be once again a spectator; his role as an active player will come soon enough.

    By this time now the show must have already begun. He unlocks the glass-panelled double door of her Watchtower with the key she gave him last week after her heart-to-heart talk with John Jones and their outing to give her a taste of life- the one she sacrificed long before her marriage to the boy went downhill. He steps inside carrying the equipment he’s decided to leave here, another move to make his presence in her life more permanent; he wishes it were something truly his but that will come next- maybe a dress shirt, a pair of Italian shoes and a change of underwear.

    Brushing up his rusty archery skills has taken him hours of practice and unbearable pain. He’s tested his abused body’s endurance bringing it to the limit and rising victorious- he’s never appreciated his being a meteor freak more than he does now. There are times when his darkness surfaces, when he feels she might end up beating him and slipping through his fingers and then, she surprises him bringing him back from the brink, back from the abyss that he finds so alluring on his bad days. Sometimes he wonders if she doesn’t know, if she hasn’t seen through this new mask he’s been wearing.

    He grabs the bottle of vintage bourbon and pours himself a tumbler. He takes a big gulp and closes his eyes to feel the alcohol warm the sinews and muscles he’s trapped in, hoping it reaches the man that is inside, wishing it could silence that little voice he still hears from time to time, the voice that makes him weak, that renders him vulnerable to the arrows this world seems to be determined to throw his way. He opens his eyes again and focuses on the stained-glass window in front of him, a veiled vision of the city that is still his thanks to the merger he manoeuvred using Tess Mercer’s former affair with the archer as bait. The world doesn’t know he’s never left the helm of his empire, not even the red-haired woman who’s living in his place at the mansion and sitting in his chair at the head of LuthorCorp Board playing games she isn’t equipped to win.

    He leaves the tumbler on the coffee table and removes an arrow from the quiver- it’s green like the meteor rocks which sealed his destiny and hers, green like her emerald eyes. He takes the compound bow, checks the tension of the bowstring, nocks the arrow and shoots it at the target standing in front of him. It hits the bull’s eye at the exact moment the double doors open and she comes in wearing the colour that looks best on her- he likes seeing her in her Luthorian purples but loves her in green.

    “Slow night? “ she asks with a wry smile as she comes closer to him.

    “Figured I'd squeeze in some target practice... and a single malt,” he replies, taking a new arrow.

    “Did you bring enough for the rest of the class? “ she responds, walking past him on her way to the sofa.

    “Help yourself, professor. You're running a little low on allegory tonight. Bumpy day? “ he says with a smile, wondering if she misses having someone at her level to spar with.

    “Not the smoothest. Someone asked me, when the last time I had a good time was, and I didn't have an answer,” she sighs, pouring herself a drink and taking a couple of sips.

    “I don't think anyone can fault you for being on the edge, Chloe. Hell, if anyone can relate it's me. I get it,” he tells her, seeing her taste the best bourbon of Lex Luthor’s cellar.

    “Yeah, you can,” she agrees with a tired smile, looking at his lean frame poised to shoot again.

    “You know... sometimes you've got to take your fun where you can get it,” he tells her, playing the card he’s been holding close to his chest for months.” And sometimes... it's right in front of your face. You just have to want to see it. Come on,” he adds for good measure, turning his face to lock his eyes with hers and schooling his features to hide the feeling of trepidation which seizes him now that the prey is a step away from falling into his trap.

    Chloe smiles a conspiratorial grin and, leaving the half empty tumbler on the coffee table, approaches him. He hands her the bow and places himself behind her to help her nock the arrow and aim. Having her in the circle of his arms, even if it isn’t the way he’s always imagined it would be like the first time, is enough to forget for just a while that she believes him to be the man who made his life at Excelsior a living hell.

    “How do I know when to let go? “ she murmurs slightly breathless.

    “It's all about your heart. Just listen. Right there in between the beats. That's when you let go,” he whispers into her ear as he covers her right hand with his and helps her tense the bowstring before making the shot.

    Bull`s eye.

    By the time she finds out the truth, that there is no Oliver Queen in her world, that there has never been one since the League’s trip to the Arctic, it’ll be too late. She’ll be too tied to him and will have to accept what he’s known for a very long time- no one will ever understand them better than themselves.

    THE END

    A/N 2:The dialogue has been taken verbatim from "Warrior" (9x12)

    READ THE SEQUEL: "The Last Ace" (Fortune Revisited)

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    Re: Undercover Warrior (PG-13)

    So Lex is pretending to be Green Arrow aka Oliver. Wow that is just all kinds of wrong. But I loved this story.
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    OMG! That was amazing. This story was so beautifully crafted I could just see it playing out on my screen. Lex posing as Oliver all to win Chloe's affection was a stroke of genius. Great job!!

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    great story

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    Ohhh, I loved the ending. Way more than I'd ever expected to get from this show, but I liked your take on it too. Lovely and slightly dark.

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    Re: Undercover Warrior (PG-13)

    Quote Originally Posted by hfce View Post
    So Lex is pretending to be Green Arrow aka Oliver. Wow that is just all kinds of wrong. But I loved this story.
    It might be all kinds of wrong, but wouldn't it be fun for Lex to have fooled everyone and ripped Oliver off his company instead of the other way round? Oh, the sweet taste of revenge!

    Glad you liked it, Hope.


    Quote Originally Posted by techwriter2 View Post
    OMG! That was amazing. This story was so beautifully crafted I could just see it playing out on my screen. Lex posing as Oliver all to win Chloe's affection was a stroke of genius. Great job!!
    Well, it shows what an unparalleled mastermind our favourite billionaire is.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me that you found it deserving enough to devote your first post to comment on it.

    I hope you'll enjoy the rest of my work just as much.

    Quote Originally Posted by lkedino View Post
    great story
    Thank you, Lara.

    Quote Originally Posted by sinecure View Post
    Ohhh, I loved the ending. Way more than I'd ever expected to get from this show, but I liked your take on it too. Lovely and slightly dark.
    Being a die-hard Lex fan, I can't feel but animosity towards OQ. I've never liked the character- not even in the comics- but I find SV's version even more annoying. His hypocrisy and his moral double standards simply piss me off. However, my annoyance when it comes to the ending of Warrior has more to do with my dissatisfaction as regards the way they`ve been handling Chloe's character and her story arcs in the last seasons than with my dislike of Oliver.I hate what they're doing with Chloe and fear for the end they will give to her- they're messing with her big time just as they did with Lex and that is something I can't tolerate.

    If they had had real guts, they would have followed through with Steven De Knight's plans and given us Chlex in Season 7. That would have been really awesome.

    Sorry for the ranting. That being said, I'm really pleased that you found my spin enjoyable, despite of our different opinions on the ending they gave us on the show.
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    Re: Undercover Warrior (PG-13)

    Great story, I love the idea of Lex pretending to be someone else to get close to Chloe.

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    Love it!!!!!

    A complete mind fuck, but I don't mind it!!! Because as much as I want to enjoy the Chlollie I just know that it's smoke screen to keep kicking Chloe fans in the teeth.

    If they had had real guts, they would have followed through with Steven De Knight's plans and given us Chlex in Season 7. That would have been really awesome.
    Ohh, really. I know they were going to suppose to do Chlollie in s6 but I don't think I hear of Chlex for s7. Now that I think about it, was it the amnesia story line that they switch to Kara??

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    Re: Undercover Warrior (PG-13)

    That was really a wonderful story, and written differently than your other ones. Good Job!

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    Re: Undercover Warrior (PG-13)

    Quote Originally Posted by daria_103 View Post
    Great story, I love the idea of Lex pretending to be someone else to get close to Chloe.
    Thanks, Linda. He's definitely willing to do anything to be near her and win her over, isn't he? Because I can't imagine what it must feel like for him to look like his oldest enemy.

    Quote Originally Posted by purplemoon123 View Post
    A complete mind fuck, but I don't mind it!!! Because as much as I want to enjoy the Chlollie I just know that it's smoke screen to keep kicking Chloe fans in the teeth.
    Yeah, it is, isn't it? But I've had this crazy idea since last season and there have been so many hints that could be interpreted the way I do. And the producers' assertion that Lex has been all the time under everyone's noses just keeps stoking my theory. And I agree with what you said about the smoke screen. They toy with all shippers and particularly with Chloe ships but always end up doing a mess. It's one big joke that hurts the only character left that is worth something on this crappy show.


    Quote Originally Posted by purplemoon123 View Post
    Ohh, really. I know they were going to suppose to do Chlollie in s6 but I don't think I hear of Chlex for s7. Now that I think about it, was it the amnesia story line that they switch to Kara??
    Not only did they think about it. They drafted it and had to backpedal when KK renewed her contract at the last minute- well, they could have gone on with it anyway if they had had the guts. And yes, Chloe was supposed to be the amnesiac one living at the mansion. Wouldn't it have been awesome to see her explore her dark side with Lex and have the couple kick everyone's butt?

    Quote Originally Posted by superag View Post
    That was really a wonderful story, and written differently than your other ones. Good Job!
    I appreciate your words, Mary. I suppose that by saying it's different from the rest of my work you mean it's slightly darker, right?
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