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    And She Was... (G, Drabble)

    100 word drabble, written inside five minutes on a total whim... Set in the future somewhere... make of it what you will

    And She Was...

    Oliver called her ‘heart of the team’, and she went along with that, because it made her feel special.

    Bart still joked about marrying ‘Chloeliscious’ one day, and she went along with that, because it amused her.

    Clark kept secrets still that only she was told, and she went along with that, because it only served to help her cause.

    Lex said he loved her as he kissed her lips and promised her forever, and she went along with that, because she would happily help bring the world crashing to its knees if it meant they would be together always.

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    Re: And She Was... (G, Drabble)

    I love you drabble!!!
    When you love someone and He love you. You can do a lot of thing!!!

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    That was sweet.
    "Everyone seems normal until you get to know them. "

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    Re: And She Was... (G, Drabble)

    Lex said he loved her as he kissed her lips and promised her forever, and she went along with that, because she would happily help bring the world crashing to its knees if it meant they would be together always.
    If only they had given us this on the show. *sighs*

    Lovely drabble.
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    Re: And She Was... (G, Drabble)

    It's amazing how you were able to express so many thoughts and feelings into your drabble!! I love that Chloe's feelings for Lex overwhelmed all of the other feelings of the people who use her!! Great story!!

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    Re: And She Was... (G, Drabble)

    Thanx for the feedback, girls I think the two points I was really trying to put across in this were (1) as much as all the guys in her life mean something to Chloe, no-one means as much as Lex, and (2) although she's working with/for the Justice League she's actually helping Lex bring them down from the inside, or similar.

    Not sure if that was really clear or not... meh, its just a drabble anyway, no big

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    Re: And She Was... (G, Drabble)

    Quote Originally Posted by hfce View Post
    That was sweet.
    Very cute
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