I read this the other day too but didn't have time to leave feedback. This was another great cliche. I love little details like Chloe counting the ceiling tiles, the thrill she can't help but feel from Lex protecting her, and her hearing the pool-talk in a sexy way.
Her psychology here rings true to me, and the smut of course is great. And how perfect and Chloe-like for her to have been pretending her inexperience with pool the whole time! Great story.
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