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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
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kimbo
Thanks guys! i really appreciate the support. i'm glad you all enjoyed this story. i'm going to miss writing it! I'm currently working on my new one, and i haven't forgotten about my other babies!
Hey! Great news, Kimbo! I look forward to seeing what your latest plot masterpiece is going to be based on... AND I'm also looking forward to seeing some movement, growth and development in your other little babies too.
*sniff* they grow up so fast, don't they?
heh, it's a good thing there will always be more to stave off that empty nest syndrome before it gets a chance to set in properly ;)
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Yes they do grow up fast!! :) :D once again i'm glad you enjoyed it, and i hope you enjoy the next!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Welcome back.
Such a sweet ending to this story. I still can't believe Chloe went through with the six kids. I for sure thought she would put her foot down on that one and have maybe three.
The boys wanting to see Superman was a nice touch. Its hard for Lex to have his boys looking up to some he thinks a fool.
Great ending.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Great story. Loved the Ending.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) Updated 5/21/07 *Epilogue Part 2 Final Chapter*
WOW!!!!! One of the best fics I've ever read. Couldn't leave till I finished all the story. CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) Updated 5/21/07 *Epilogue Part 2 Final Chapter*
Loved everything...the story, the epilogues...it was just great reading
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) Updated 5/21/07 *Epilogue Part 2 Final Chapter*
I haven't read chlex fic in ages and I just read all of this story. It was brilliant. You had just the right amount of angst for me as I don't really like angst a lot. Then the epilogues were really cute I loved the sound of all the kids.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Oh my goodness that was so cute. Six kids wow. :lol: They got a whole team. I loved this story and it had a great ending. Bravo! :clapclap:
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) Updated 5/21/07 *Epilogue Part 2 Final Chapter*
Awesome fic.....loved it!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
I loved this story and eagerly awaiting for the next fic!!! Love the ending!!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
:respect: I actually cried a bit when Lex broke up with her. Great story.
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Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 4-9-06 Chapter 8 * (NC-17)
Okay I have to say this. I was going to waite till I had read it all, but then I read the ice cream bit. AHHH!! Chloe I feel your pain! But really letting Lois near her Ice Cream was just wrong. Lex must pay, and BLana well can we stick her in a pink room and play reruns of old beatnecks in nothing but Black.
Okay I'm going back to read the rest!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
that was such a sweet ending. great story, i loved it :)
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
I hadn`t read the epilogue yet so I decided to read all the fic again instead of just the epilogue
This fic is amazing
I laughed again, cried again and loved it again
:)
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
This was a fabulous fic. Great job.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
i don't comment much.
but i loved this story.
read it in two days... haha, i need a life. ;)
:D
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Re: Startling Revelation *Announcement 4-14-07*
I love it! Wonderfull work!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Just wanted to say that I thought this was a fantastic story.......perfect combination of romance, humor, angst & smut......hope to see more in the future!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Just finished reading. I loved it. Six children sound scary to me, but I`m sure Lex and Chloe can handle anything. Even the sappy parts were very well writen, not to mention the smut. Amazing job! :clapclap:
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Great story!
It was a good read.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
This story was fantastic.I couldn't stop reading.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
I just reread this story and I still love it.
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Re: Startling Revelation *Updated 3-6-07 Epilogue Part1* (NC-17)
Another stellar literary work! Loved the way you depicted their flourishing relationship with both a sense of romance and realism. Simply stunning :).
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
OMG I completely loved this story! It was absolutely fabulous!
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Re: Startling Revelation *Part1* (NC-17)
I just wanted to say this fic is totally rockin!! Love the premise and how you build the relationship to where they're not just jumping into bed with eachother like two horny monkeys!! Lol. Love you and love this fic! Can't wait for more work by you, will be keeping two impatient eyes open! Thanks again for the great Chlexy goodness!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
I can't believe I've not read this before.
It was excellent. Loved it!!!!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
WOW!!! This was an absolutely fantastic story! I have to admit that when I first started it, I was very hesitant because Chloe creating a plan to make Lex fall in love with her seemed a little ridiculous and out of character, but someone you managed to characterize her perfectly. I really liked that Lex left Chloe (even though the Chlex in me was crying) because it was realistic of him and make things a little more interesting so we didn't immediately jump to "happily ever after". Anyways, this was just utterly amazing!! :)
-emms14
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Love the way this fic ended!
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Re: Startling Revelation *Part1* (NC-17)
Wonderful.
I loved that it was a super story, complete with drama, laughter, a little suspense and much, much, much romance and sex.
I love how much they loved each other.
A very nice ending.
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Re: Startling Revelation *Part1* (NC-17)
So i just got finished reading this story a second time and loved it again. great story
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
:ecstatic: Okay, I am not even close to being finish yet (chapter 16, I think) but I want to put this one down first before I completely forgot the reasons I am absolutely loving this story so far.:ecstatic:
I love it because it is refreshin that Chloe is the one that is chasing Lex :wub:
I like that there is no twisted, disturbing manipulation that started the relationship
I like that Chloe didn't have to have her heart completely broken (what with Lex and lana at the beginning) before Lex started caring for her
:love2: I love how you potray them as a couple that they could be (no argument starting at petty reason, solving problem by talking no yelling, sharing moments)
I like all the hot scenes between them :wub:
I really like how your story could have been something that is very much possible to happen in the series (if only, blurgh on that) :wth:
:wub: I like how protective Lex is of Chloe and how Chloe (finally) understands and compromises about it
Overall, I love them loving each other :love2:, I love your story, I love you as an author that came up with this awesome story and I am very much looking forward to continue reading this.
Thanks and keep up the good work! :clapclap:
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=sigh= I know that was coming, the break up in chapter 17 that is, but I can't help but keep reading.
I understood him though, feeling the way he must have felt when Chloe went missing must have been really hard for someone like him.
And I really really want to tell her 'He told you so'
Okay, onward...
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Okay, it is not 24 hours yet but it is a whole 12 hours and a blooming new day for me down here in New Zealand and I will post this reply before the lecture I have to get to in a couple of hours melts my brain and make me forget all the reasons why I love this story.
If anyone have a problem with this contact me first and mind what I said in my signature (the second part).
Here goes:
FINALLY!!!
I've reached the end!!! :D Woohoo! :ecstatic:
A year? A whole year and Lex didn't do anything naughty-like at all? Wow! So different than how I would have pictured him doing from what I can see in the series so far. He's nothing at al like the one in the series... otherwise he would have at least tried to torture Chloe and himself by having a hot female plastered on him.
All the same...
... HAPPY ENDING!!! :love2: YAY!! :clapclap:
I love how you make their make-up time something that takes a while. Makes sense that they are not people that just simply realised they made a mistake and jump back in together. Their kids are adorable! SIX of them!!!
And more hot scenes... hmmm. :P
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your story. :wub: Great work. Keep up the writing! Looking forward to reading another story by you. :D
:worship:
note: thanks to lexie for looking out for me :)
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Very nice story. You kept the drama up in the story and relationship without having to use overused ploys...I mean only one kidnapping for Chloe? (smiles)
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
really enjoyed this story..i thought it had good pacing to it as well great job!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
This story is what got me hooked to this website and all the talented authors. It is also I have to say one of my favorites because it was the first one that had me glued to this site and wanting to read your entire story in one night. I just reread it again this past month and it is just as good as the second time around. Love this story! Great job! Hope to see more coming from a devoted and avid reader of Chlex. =D
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
oh wow! thank you i'm glad you all enjoyed it!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) Updated 5/21/07 *Epilogue Part 2 Final Chapter*
this fic had everything growth, drama and a daddy lex! Oh and some great smut!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) Updated 5/21/07 *Epilogue Part 2 Final Chapter*
Great story, keept me up til 1 am.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) Updated 5/21/07 *Epilogue Part 2 Final Chapter*
I just read this story again and I love it just as much the second time around. So glad Chloe and Lex have their happily ever after.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
This fic is so amazing, so complete... It has friendship, romance, smut, drama and fun
Love it
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
The only bad thing about this story was that it ended. Loved, loved, loved.
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Amazing fic! Dramatic, sweet, cute, funny and lots of romance! Loved it! Thanks for the awesome read!
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
Brilliant story it had a bit of everything
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
the epilogue ending is epic and the entire story is amazing,, i love your version of lex,used to read lex as sex god,,, i burst out laughing when lex had pre-ejac. like i need a minute to breathe. its hilarious.. i love that you build their friendship before jumping the bed,
when they break up,, my feelss... i understand why lex did what he did,,.. i'm just glad they are back together..
lex and chloe have 6 children!!!!!!! chlex moment with their kids was the cutest...
and i want to hug ben cutie,,i can imagine lex running after butt naked ben.. lol
really enjoy this story, thank you
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
I love the tell me a secret game
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Re: Startling Revelation (NC-17) *Epilogue part 2 updated 5/21/07*
I just finished reading this for a second time and I still love it! Such a great story!