Re: Haves And Have-nots (NC-17)
Wow! This is so painfully sad. You need to slap an angst warning on these things. I felt the need to cry (thankfully I was able to restrain myself). Now I have to go and read something happy dang-it.
I love that this is written from Lana’s point of view. You can really see the psychosis coming through. I also got the impression of this haze over her mind the entire time which in turn made the entire story hazy. I don’t know if that makes sense or even if you meant it that way but I thought it really added to Lana’s instability.
Great job on this (despite the depressing nature of the thing), and thanks for writing.
txalb
Re: Haves And Have-nots (NC-17)
This does need an angst warning I was close to tears and ready to kill the pink princess!! What a tragic story and I so wanted Lex to slap Lana or at least turn everyone against her!!! I did enjoy the secret sex they were having in the talon I can now fantasize that Lex and Chloe are really getting it on in the show who knows what goes on in the talon after dark;)
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Re: Haves And Have-nots (NC-17)
Chloe should come back from the dead and beat BLANA's @$$!!
Re: Haves And Have-nots (NC-17)
Like I have always known Lana is comeplete pyscopath and Lex should kill her.
Re: Haves And Have-nots (NC-17)
Wow, this was really good!
I loved it and was surprised with the ending! :D
I can't believe i haven't read this before now.
Re: Haves And Have-nots (NC-17)
Well that was tragic. Lana is a self centred cow.
Re: Haves And Have-nots (NC-17)
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missmagick
Well that was tragic. Lana is a self centred cow.
What she said... lmao great fic