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LOL What a great little twist you had there, I truly thought that she was reading a blow by blow description of Lex and Chloe's life! I must admit, I did wonder why they were being so not discreet, but I loved the little revelation at the end :)
Very nice!
Kerry
Hee Hee! That was fun, and cute!
LOL Oh man! I was thinking it was Lex that was writing the novel! That was too funny! I loved it!
Loved it :) She should listen to her father and get chlexy xD
LMAO... that's just hilarious. Can't wait to read more. :)
I just can't stop grinning. To think of dear old Gabe...! I especially like the idea that he has pent up subconscious (or subtextual?) suspicions regarding another notable Joseph Alexander's designs on a bright blonde reporter-hopeful. Nice work! ;)
I'm with sylvia...I wonder what this says about Gabe's thoughts on Lex and Chloe? Hmm...
But you had me at the title. I was like...WTF? I've gotta read this or else curiosity will drive me mad! ;)
And half way through I almost *went* mad but, thankfully, the end explained it all!
Reese
That was great, I love the fact that Gabe wrote the story. Now we know where Chloe gets her talent.
That was awesome! Very humorous! I loved the way you misled the reader. It just made the ending that much greater!:D
hahaha! i really liked this. it just has a good feel to it. congrats.