Very intresting start, cant wait to read more.
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Very intresting start, cant wait to read more.
This is really good, I'm enjoying whats happening so far. I hope there's going to be more soon :)
another great update. i can not wait to read about what happens next.
No way I want more. How did it leave Chloe and still effect Lex. Come on back please.... :beg:
Hope ;)
I think this is the quickest chapter I ever read. More please.
Everything is happening so fast I think you need to write longer chapters ;) [ or a lot more short ones. whatever you prefere ;)]
This is a great story, and I'm glad it was Lois and Clark together I don't think i could stomach any more Clark Lana stuff. I loved the Chlex parts , and I agree ,more please ;)
Cannot wait to see where this one goes.I hope youŽll make more Chlex scenes.Update soon, pleeeeease :grin3:
haha im still complaining about the size, more sin city please *olvatine themesong playing* i like it please update
very interesting so far i can't wait for more so please update soon.
Hmmm... To be honest (which is the way I prefer comments to be), it wasn't the smuttiest I've read. As it is now, it's not really NC17. This would be... Hm.. PG15 tops. I know this story's only started, and things might progress, but you might want to take this under consideration :)
It wasn't too bad, a little too much OOC for me though ;) But keep at it, perhaps you'll surprise me with a chapter that'll even make me want a cold shower ;)
As a little sidenote: I'm working on writing a little "what's NC17?" topic, which might shed some light as to what NC17 is, or, at least what it is here on NS :) Just getting all of my facts first ;) Hehe...