Great update but I am still sacred for Chloe. I dont want Lionel's penis anywhere near Chloe. :(
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Great update but I am still sacred for Chloe. I dont want Lionel's penis anywhere near Chloe. :(
Hehe. Yeah, what she said.Quote:
I don't want Lionel's penis anywhere near Chloe.
Wonderful update. I'm also a big fan of protective/obsessive Lex. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow! This is some story! I just started reading it last night and finished today. Usually I'm not into dark fics, but I'm gald I've kept reading. Lionel is an absolute bastard... you do an excellent job of writing him. Lex and Chloe are also well written. There is just too much about this fic that I loved, to write it all down. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
HA!! That's all I have to say.Quote:
Originally Posted by nonky
Steph*
Loved the insight into Lex's thinking. He's being so protective over Chloe gives me a warm fuzzy feeling. She needs a guardian angel right now. (Who else would have put Lex in the roll of an angel?)
I laughed at Lionel near infertility. But I'm worried that this means that he'll want more chances with Chloe to improve his odds of getting her pregnant. -Bad mental image.. must go scrub my brain out while I wait for my next update-
Ok, Lex had better make sure that his father won't be able to perform sexually!! Especially not where Chloe is concerned!! I'm still so worried for her, why doesn't Lex take her away somewhere!! They could tour Europe, the Congo, Africa!! Ok, I know, impractical, but I really wish that Chloe wouldn't have to meet up with Lionel again!! Incredible update!! This story is amazing!!
Why doesnt she just chop MB's penis off? that would solve her problem. lol. kidding. As much as a submissive lex is fun, and hmmm....well.......yes. I do hope we get a hands on gropy lex at some point because he's a fun guy too. ;)
Im really starting to love this story. The fact that its so dark and raw makes it all the more real.
This is one of the few chlex stories where Lex seems true to the character created on the show.
Keep up the good work! And PLEASE update soon!!
Ha ha! :devil: That's well deserved!Quote:
Originally Posted by nonky
Eewwww! Weirdo! I wish he wouldn't be able to get it up...Nonky, please, could that be the next step of Lionel's degradation? Please!Quote:
“Will I still be able to perform sexually,” he asked.
The doctor’s chagrin was palpable.
“I believe so, sir.”
Well, that was something.
no offense, but i really dont want to think about the lionel in this fic as having the ability to perform....it gave me goosebumps and not the good ones...
i really like chloe and lex's continuing relationship. you are building it very well.
more soon
randa
Ok, I know I just started reading this fic this weekend, but I'm adictied... please update soon... pretty pretty please!!! [if I knew how to use smiles and such I would insert a lot here :) ]