Salvation & Death (Rated PG-15)
Title: Salvation & Death
Author: CRae
Rating: M [PG-15]
Summary: A glimpse into Chloe Sullivan's future. Drabble. [Chloe/Clark, Chloe/Lex]
Disclaimer: Smallville and its characters belong to DC Comics, The WB & many others. No profit was made from this story.
Spoilers: None.
Feedback: I never refuse feedback.
Notes: Just a little something to knock the writer's block. Again.
Salvation & Death
Thick, dark hair and soulful green eyes. Calloused fingertips committing the feel of her skin to memory. Warm, loving kisses.
He tasted like peppermint and purity. Sweet and untouched. Salvation.
He was the man she loved but could not have.
Thick, dark hair morphed--becoming flesh; a shade paler than ivory. The eyes burning into hers became steel in color and emotion. Harsh. Cold. Fumbling in the dark became calculated touches. Sunlight pouring through stained glass.
He tasted like expensive brandy and death. Fear and hatred. Iniquity.
He was the man she abhorred but could not escape.
End.
Re: Salvation and Death [Rated PG-15]
What a sad story, how could you make Clark good and Lex bad? After everything Clark has done to Chloe; the lies, using her for research purposes, never giving her credit, never trusting her, etc!! I think the Lex is a much better option!! Thank goodness Chloe ends up with him!!
Re: Salvation and Death [Rated PG-15]
simple but cuts deep.....
Re: Salvation and Death [Rated PG-15]
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Originally Posted by suspension of disbelief
simple but cuts deep.....
That's exactly what I would say! Bravo!
Re: Salvation and Death [Rated PG-15]
A great example of how much can be said without using a lot of words. Great job.
Re: Salvation and Death [Rated PG-15]
WOW!!! that was great but i wish lex was good instead of clark. chloe is right lex will never let her go even in death.
Re: Salvation and Death [Rated PG-15]
the fewer words the better. You're statements were powerful, and you didn't even have to say that much. BRAVO
Re: Salvation and Death [Rated PG-15]
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Originally Posted by
autumngold
What a sad story, how could you make Clark good and Lex bad? After everything Clark has done to Chloe; the lies, using her for research purposes, never giving her credit, never trusting her, etc!! I think the Lex is a much better option!! Thank goodness Chloe ends up with him!!
... ummm... yep! Great ficlet
