Haha, awesome. It was a while before I got it, though. I'm slow like that.
Great smut, by the way. Write more!
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Haha, awesome. It was a while before I got it, though. I'm slow like that.
Great smut, by the way. Write more!
I loved the way you wrote this. Leaving us little clues that one would not normally catch. I found myself re-reading a few of the paragraphs before I could move on to the next to make sure I had just read what I thought I had just read. Great smut too.
EXCELLENT
:D and I agree.. withh everybody up there *points to other reviews* damn! :drool: you need to write more smut girl!
whooo, is it hot in here or is it just this fic?
yeesh....good times
awesome fic, loved it
keep writing
~B
Thank you, everyone who reviewed! I was a little nervous about writing smut, because first, I wanted to be as original as possible, and second... well, it's silly, but I kind of felt like my smut writing was a reflection of my personal skills, so it was kind of like putting my whole bedroom ego out there to be squashed :lol: Anyway, thanks again - I think there may be a prequel to this piece, but I'm trying to get in the mood to update Freak first.
You had no need to worry hun...
*slobber*
:smut:
wow that was a very hot one very good :smoker:
Oh, I loved it! Retard that I am though I didn't get that it wasn't Lois until the very end when he called her by name...lol. Great job!!
:drool: :smoker: That was some good :smut:
the story was just great, and loved the smut!!!