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That was fab!! chloe and lex were great, and their 'inner conversations' were spot on: Loved all the action in the later chapters... bruce... rox, sin and delilah (lol btw, they were great!!)... I totally loved your treatment of Lana :devil:
Can't wait to read more of your work,
~Becky~
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A just read this story and absolutely love it.
The Chlex relationship was a adorable. Sin and Roxy hade me laughing my ass off. Bruce just love him. Lana what a bitch.
I'm hoping you wrote the sequel, can't wait to see when Bruce the whole gang!
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This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I found it long ago in your web, before you changed it and I love it. Homourr, smut, adventure, but especially LOVE. They are so cuteeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing. You are the best.
By the way, I remember a sequel, no? Did you finished that fic? Bye
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It was a very nice fic fun and sexy !
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Wow
all i can say is perfect, this fic is perfect.
This story has everything, a lot of fun, many hot scenes, a nice end.
And the great bruno saving the day.
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great storyline really enjoyed all the girls charecters...can you imagine the mayhem they are going to cause in Smallville - lol
great job thanks for writing
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That was awesome! Action, romance, drama and comedy! Loved it!