Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/22/08
Wonderful update!
I'm glad that they are finally getting closer!
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
Wonderful update, the tension between those two is clearly visible, which I am sure is what you intend.
My only complaint is that I will now have to wait another 7 days for an update.
Thank You! :)
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
Very sweet, its nice to know what Lex is thinking and how he already sees himself with Chloe and them having a future together. Dagney
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/22/08
Great chapter. They finally got their crap out in the open. Can't wait for the next chapter. I loved the dialogue in Lex head about Chloe having the perfect hips to carry his child. That was the best line ever.
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
That was a great update. I am glad their feelings are finally known. More please..... :beg:
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
What a wonderful date!!!
Love that Lex got distracted because he was noticing Chloe's form. And the second to last paragraph was just *sigh*. More sexual tension, please.
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
Great chapter, I'm so glad they've finally let their feelings be known. I loved Lex noticing her figure and his thought about her having the perfect hips to carry his child - I'll be savouring that line until the next update.
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
Two of you have quoted that line as your favourite, and... well... I should say itīs also one of mine.
Iīm pleased you approve, girls. Who wouldnīt like to be romantically courted by a gentlemanly Lex, right?:)
And, yes, thereīll be more tension in the chapters to come so keep tuned.
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
The sexual tension between those two was awesome and I hope for more. *grins* The date was wonderful and I loved that they both opened up to each other... Finally!
A really great chapter... I loved it and I look forward to reading more soon!!
Re: Rebuilding (Sequel to Crossing Paths) PG-13/R Upd. 8/29/08
Thanks for your feedback. Thereīll be more tomorrow so stay tuned.:grin3: