Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) finished 4/6/08
I'm going to be honest and tell you I was holding off on reviews because I wanted to see how this ended before giving my opinion. I really did like how realistic it was that Chloe and Lex broke up and Lex kind of moved on. Honest. And I liked the way things worked out for them. I think the moment in the car was one of the most heartbreaking scenes when she asked him not to go. I could feel Chloe's emotion in that scene. I can see that this relationship will probably take some work to get it fully back to where it was but they are trying and are playful again and all seems to be well. And thank you for the smut because I didn't think it was fair that Chloe had to go so long without sex and I would have hated for this story to end without that problem being resolved.
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) finished 4/6/08
It was a great story.
I'm glad that they are finally together.
I will wait your next story.
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) finished 4/6/08
This was a great ending, complete with smut and Chlexy cuteness:D
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) finished 4/6/08
Superag you have outdone yourself. Seriously.
I love love love this story. Did I mention that I love it? I do.
You even got a tear from me. I don't do that easily, but Chloe in the car begging him not to go got to me.
Thanks for writing it for us to enjoy. Bravo :clapclap:
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) updated 3/30/08
I loved this fic.
Nothing more romantic than Chloe using kryptonite to protect Lex, and the scene in the car when she asked him not to go.
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) updated 3/30/08
Duude... I was about to cry thinking that Lex left forever after the game... blurgh!? @_@ The rest of the fluffiness made up for it though. I love imagining Lex playing sport especially since he seems to always be dapper and un-mussed in the series (as far as I have watched anyway. Higher authority that is my friend said there mussed-Lex-scenes somewhere down the line but I'm so behind I'm not sure). Here's to catching up with the storyline.
Lovely work by the way. Thank you fot he good read :) :) :D :D
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) updated 3/30/08
Soooo gooooood. Wanted to smack chlex's heads together at one point, their both so proud and stubborn... grrrrr. But great ending :)
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) updated 3/30/08
This was a great story! I am eagerly awaiting your next fanfic!
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) updated 3/30/08
weird story, but love the chlex.
Re: 4th Down and a Longshot (NC-17) updated 3/30/08